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Old 01-31-05, 10:04 AM   #1
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...{Afraid Of Death}...

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The ones afraid to Die, are the ones holding back
never to realize that life isnt just a scolding act
overcome your fears, whipe away the tears, and live
the end is never near, you got many years, to live
Looking back to the past, should never be an option
but learn from mistakes, for lifes great adoptions
Never regret, and never let, the past blind your path
now look back, only to give your last crime a laugh
afraid of death? and theres still air left in your breath
being afraid, leaves your mind high, like red and meth
the route to life is turning your lies to truth, and dreams to reality
giving truth to the youth, now thats your high, like a fiends fatality
many people live with low salary's, leaving suicide is a threat, bitch
family's in debt cuz bush wont let blacks live, fuck, he'll regret this


iight uppin...
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Old 01-31-05, 10:20 AM   #2
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Old 01-31-05, 05:45 PM   #3
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WTF is It With You and DEATH lol .................You and DEATh must Have some kinda beef LOL
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Old 01-31-05, 09:21 PM   #4
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lmfao... nah i just dont kno what to name my verses and my friend wouldnt stop saying the word death, and it got stuck in my head so i had to use it lol
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Old 01-31-05, 11:08 PM   #5
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Yo i like it...

overcome your fears, whipe away the tears, and live
the end is never near, you got many years, to live
^^^That shits right there is hott... not too many people pull those types of llines any more... you feel off at some points but then came back with some sick line, try some more multiples, nah mean? but its was a decent drop... do me a favor and leave feed on the open mic in my sig.
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Old 02-01-05, 09:03 AM   #6
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this shit will not count.....
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streatched line... flow seemed off... good vocab... it was pretty decent

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NO NO NO NO NO..... thats not a proper feed back and the other is even worse then this one...

2 line feed back wont count, u must give a proper feed back with pros and cons what was good * quote it* what was bad * if u want to quote it* then drop what he could of done and what he should fix up....

thats a proper feed back... u have till 9:30 tonight befor i close this tread...
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