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Old 07-18-02, 08:38 AM   #1
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Week 6: Topical open mic winner

IP: 4427 437B

i was impressed with this week pieces i enjoyed reading them the top 3 thisweek were Whited_out OnSlaught and MC4Eyez
but the winner is

OnSlaught

Nurse: We’re loosing him! Doctor, we need to start operating, now!

Huh… where am I, everything… bright…

God: Welcome my son, your in a place where reality is but my illusion, where I create clarity, and I control confusion, dilutions, and my word is but my will, by the force of my constitution./
OnSlaught: Why have I been brought here, were those shots my final sights? Is that the meaning of this visit, is this the meaning of those lights, is that why your presence shimmers and glows so bright, I’m sorry that I failed you, I had no strength left to fight./
G: True I have but called you, but not for long, there are questions in your mind, and I am never wrong, If you believe in me, your memories be strong, but if you loose your faith then your memories will be gone./
O: I have so many questions, do aliens Exist?/
G: Everything exists within the power of my midst/
O: And are there such things as Miracles, that happen just because they do?/
G: You were shot 5 times, and you will not die, shouldn’t I ask that of you?/
O: Will you forgive me for my sins? I have sinned against all those below and above./
G: I have already forgiven you, for this and this alone is God’s Love./
O: Will the world ever end, just be destroyed within my lifetimes range/
G: It all depends… on whether or not the world can ever change./
O: Does that mean that one day there might be peace?/
G: Perhaps, but only if the hatred of humans will ever cease./
O: I only hope my children will see that day./
G: And so they will, but only if you teach them in my ways./
G: And only if you spread my words, for my words are the key to salvation./
G: And one of my single words alone, can destroy all and every temptation./
G: But none of this will be true if you continue with your retaliation/
O: You knew? That I would go back and strike him with my wrath?/
G: I know everything, and that is the wrong path/
G: You can choose now to make something of your Life/
G: But you have to choose now, either the light or the knife/
G: And if you choose the Knife, expect a life of Strife, and never meeting you children or your wife/
O: I understand, I believe that there is nothing else I need
G: Oh by the way… there’s nothing wrong with a little weed.

Nurse: Doctor, we’ve revived him!


that's his verse thaks to everyone who dropped a piece
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Old 07-19-02, 11:52 AM   #2
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Iread this in the original Post...well done Jamil...props...
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Old 07-19-02, 11:58 AM   #3
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I won, yay

Thanks for responding Off Center, I hope I do as well week 7 as I did this week, peace
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