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Old 01-24-05, 09:58 PM   #1
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just something i dropped at a battle over at RB earlier wanted some feed over here too...

Water


a build up...an accumulating substance of everything
withstandable of random objects and almost anything
carries thoughts, memories, and unexplained mysteries
far out to the horizon, close to land, blue or green...
...its more then just a liquid if its able to transform
into extensive shapes, and be the heart of a storm
its something that wasnt born, nor cappable of death
impossible to be torn,leaves its victims in a state of arrest
no need for it to regress, it moves forward without warning
without its waves and ingrediants it would just be boring
it can give life and contribute to the burst of growth
its what saves some...and is mezmorized at the coast
it cant roast it overcomes fire in most to all cases...
...flames weaken when water intertwines and laces
to choke the fire and hault its crazed burning wrath
enslaved the flames condition,so its victims remain intact
but dont get it twisted waters also a curse next to fire
it can weaken strength until you collapse, fuck tired
without the ability to swim it engolfs your body
like quicksand or souls taken from an impact of a shotty
and forces your thoughts into the slick current
at the bottom of it are the souls of the brave and purest
but it can represent emotions whether your sad or angered
an action is shown when those elements are loved like poetry excerpts
it drains out of eyes when saddened views form through light
and shines bright when the suns rays sparkle at it at night
but how could the sun develop at night, thats like disobeying rules
or how could water begin life...and then take it back from you.......
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Old 01-24-05, 10:05 PM   #2
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ill drop my link tomorrow morning i cant now...
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Old 01-25-05, 10:46 AM   #3
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Old 01-25-05, 06:14 PM   #4
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uppin............
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UPPIN............................................. .d
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Old 01-25-05, 11:44 PM   #6
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this is why i dont drop oms...shit dont get fed on this is my last uppin most likely

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Old 01-26-05, 01:19 AM   #7
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solid peice man. good use of vocab, sorta made me think once or twice to what you were actually getting at. I like it. Good solid topical drop.

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Old 01-26-05, 01:35 AM   #8
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deep, nice topical.
I've read two drops on this site and they've both been deep topicals.
Feelin' it.
u dropped this in a topical battle im guessing.
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Old 01-26-05, 08:28 PM   #9
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deep, nice topical.
I've read two drops on this site and they've both been deep topicals.
Feelin' it.
u dropped this in a topical battle im guessing.



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solid drop final liked it man...liked the imagery and words...like they said it was pretty deep for the symbolism ya placed in it...big ups man if ya need some more feeds pm my ass.........
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im feelin that shit
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