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Old 07-20-02, 03:42 AM   #1
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first attempt at poetry give some feedback

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I WAKE UP EVERYDAY THINKING ABOUT YOU
ASKING MYSELF HOW COULD I LOSE AN ANGEL LIKE YOU
I STILL REMEMBER THE DAY YOU SAID WE WERE THROUGH
MY MIND WENT CRAZY TRYING TO FIGURE OUT WHAT I COULD DO
I GUESS IT WAS BECAUSE I WASNT TRUE TO YOU BOO
GOD HAS PLACE ME HERE TO BE WIT YOU
GIVE AND DO EVERTHING YOU WANT ME TO
THATS WHY IM GLAD YOU ACCEPTED ME
SO STOP COMPLAINING AND FORGET ABOUT THE PAST AND SAY"I DO"


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Aint as deep as other people poem but go wit it
and its short cuz i aint use to this romantic stuff ya know
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