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07-20-02, 03:42 AM | #1 | |
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first attempt at poetry give some feedback
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I WAKE UP EVERYDAY THINKING ABOUT YOU
ASKING MYSELF HOW COULD I LOSE AN ANGEL LIKE YOU I STILL REMEMBER THE DAY YOU SAID WE WERE THROUGH MY MIND WENT CRAZY TRYING TO FIGURE OUT WHAT I COULD DO I GUESS IT WAS BECAUSE I WASNT TRUE TO YOU BOO GOD HAS PLACE ME HERE TO BE WIT YOU GIVE AND DO EVERTHING YOU WANT ME TO THATS WHY IM GLAD YOU ACCEPTED ME SO STOP COMPLAINING AND FORGET ABOUT THE PAST AND SAY"I DO" -------------- Aint as deep as other people poem but go wit it and its short cuz i aint use to this romantic stuff ya know |
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