hmmm shit aint finished... calam wants to re record his verse... even though it sounds fine... Im gonna re record as well.. did this in like 2 seconds to get my flow down... there is NO chorus... NO editing pretty much on my verse... cept noise reduction... soo..

Listen at your own risk.

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And any suggestions would help... tell me what to do to make it better. But dont chuck a captain obvious and go "ohh you need dubs and better quality and blah blah" .. besides the obvious stuff.. what is there?

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let me get on this shit.......

clamity.....raise vocals.....nuice lyrics...yeah i think oyu shoudl do this one more time.....
good shit...

OMB....lyrics are OK.....you need to spit your shit again..btu nice....good presence...ohhh breathe control..work on those strechted lines.....good multies....work on spitting this again...good kicking knowledge...ALI line was messed up..fix that....

i see why CLAM wanted to do his over agian...

but since oyu guuys are gonna re record..let me get ont his also.....please.....im loven this beat....i can have my shit done by tommorow.......
let me no if i can spit a verse....even if it has to be a 25 second verse...lol

all in all...nice shit..i dont give out numbers.....but yeah..i love the beat...

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I couldnt tell there were stretched lines... Whats messed up bout ali line?

and nah the beats too short... if you listen closely, the shit starts fadin out just before i finish my verse.. lol

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well i oculd loop the beat...and the ali line...

i wil get back to you on that...im gonna edit this post in like 3mins..im gonna listen again...

and it was just like oyu ran out of breath ..that is basically what i was saying....lol
i was tyrping as i was listening so i dont really no what iwas saying....keystyle feedback...lol

EDITED..here you go...

when you said...19.......76.....it was liek oyu forgot what you had to say...
it wasnt stretched but that is what it seemed like



also i can do a chorus if oyu want.....can i do the chorus...

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Clam has a dope flow, and good delivery on it, I can't tell the quality cuz the hifi link wasn't workin for me

M.B. you need to put more effort into it, of course you prolly realize that. and pace yourself, you sound rushed to spit in some spots. the is off-balance cuz you have one guy rapping for one minute, then you have another guy rappin for two minutes straight, it dulls out the track, you should at least repeat the hook once and split your verse into two parts

not not bad, i cans ee why you dont like your verse but its not bad if you record it again i think it will be better but its not bad

yea this shit was hot. Calamity do need to redo his verse but it was still good right here. but if he redo it then it should be on point. Lyrics was hot for both of yall i mainly liked this because i always make sure i check out OMB from time to time and ive always like Calamitys shit. so rerecord the verse, get a hook and this could be one of the all time best