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KO-Cain 5 100.00%
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Old 02-01-05, 02:18 AM   #1
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KO-Cain vs @.

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topical-ruthless


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Old 02-01-05, 10:49 PM   #2
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@. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-01-05 10:49 PM.
 
Old 02-01-05, 11:15 PM   #3
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Ruthless

Adjective: without mercy or pity (Example: "An act of ruthless ferocity")

As i live this life,just growing of age,
Things around me are confusing,so im stowing my rage
Once its unleashed,i stop caring for you and everyone around
i snatch the purse of an 80 year old lady,watch her fall to the ground
I grew up in the surroundings of hate,no love to be shared
I was allways the type of person,to do what im dared
A bit of alcohol isnt the reason im like this
Murder is just a hobbie,I dont need to be rightous
never back down,from even the biggest of person
Im never sitting in church,could you vision me cursin
I live life twisted,in my invisible maze
some ask me to stop!! I say "im just living my days"
my moneys floats out my hand,quicker than its snatched in
Sideway's round corner's,fuck being strapped in
lifes calling me,but its in the back round distant
I feel like I know it all,But dont care for wisdom
I guess i know how the teeriost's of a plane were thinking
damn!! spiritually we must be linking
cause I could of been the pilot that day
I would of found it fun,to end my life that way
 
Old 02-02-05, 12:14 AM   #4
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Old 02-02-05, 12:20 AM   #5
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"Ruthless"

Journal Entry #15 -- "Sick of it!"
Man..
When will the murder stop? Its spreading rampent..
Were dancing with a develous breed, making advancments..
The plan is, to take crime off the streets, but fuck it..
My dear beloved... Cops will always be out-numbered..
See, stopping the violence is called; pure insanity..
Profanity.. Humans need war, peace is blashpemy..
To some, but son; the sun shines too bright..
Its time to get wise, not spark minds, I'm lighting the fires..
Supplying desires, of many you just need to see it..
The world full of stupid minds, that need to be hit..
Dont see this, as a wake up call, son the truth is..
Hold your own; cause the whole world is fucking ruthless..


"When you live life on the edge, all boundries of whats normal suddenly become irrelevant. Survival mode takes over".

Journal Entry #17 -- "I just shot a man"
Look,
People dont always go, by what they say..
I heard story's, but to have it happen, I'm in dismay..
I wished the way his face looked, would drift away..
Fuck it, I wish I just forgot the whole fucking day..
If something played, out different maybe I woulda chilled!!..
But it didnt, and the resault? ...An old man was killed..
Yeah.... -But thats the past, no changing what went down..
If I could re-arrange one thing, I'd want god around..


For me..
Cause if I got nothing to die for..
Then whats it all worth..?
Think about that..


Final Entry -- "I'm stressed. Goodbye."
Uh huh..
And think about ya pal; the guys in prison now..
Not really living how, he planned his vision out..
When he started life.. It was hardly trife..
But now? My two cents, this is hardly life..
Fuck it.....Everyday theres new beef, on who's chief..
Of the institution I'm kept in, I knew we..
Had no chance of living in a system controlled by..
Crooked cops, ruthless people, while I strolled by..
Before I was electrafied, with a certain future..
I find..
Being ruthless was the only way I'm used to..
Used to..
Used to..


"You learn your entire personality from when your young. What you learn, and the way you see people interact.. Will stick with you. If a child grows up around violence, they'll grow into violent people. And nobody's gonna change that".

Think about it..
PEACE.
 
Old 02-02-05, 12:39 AM   #6
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Aiight nicly done.

Lets get the voters up in here.
 
Old 02-02-05, 03:39 AM   #7
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word dope shit. keep that up mate you will be a top head on this sight.
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Old 02-02-05, 06:08 AM   #8
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Vote or die............................................... ......
 
Old 02-02-05, 11:33 AM   #9
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Voted For: KO-Cain

danm u won hands down....

ya verse was preety long but a good read u got into details u had ya twist in the story u was getting deep into details that keep me wanting to read the rest and then the introduction to each seprate verse help a little bit i thoughtN the ecko-at the end it was like i actully herd someone saying it used to used to * HEY WHO DA FUCK IS THERE*
nah but it was creative and everything fit right to me and flow weell one hella topical verse here..... 9.0/10

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ya verse was short and sweet * no homo* the begining started off kinda weak, 80 year old women ECT that was kinda simple minded thoughts, u feel me??.....
im not hate'in but ya creativeness was lack'in in this battle but i thought this bar was hto thou...

never back down,from even the biggest of person
Im never sitting in church,could you vision me cursin

that was simple but with a message inside it that kinda hit hard even thou it was still simple...
ya read was sorda enjoyable but none the less it still was a good drop nice battle fellas....

vote: ko-cain....
 
Old 02-02-05, 01:52 PM   #10
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I just wanna check polls..

KO-Cain's shit was mad tight though..
 
Old 02-02-05, 03:06 PM   #11
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werd, props to Ko-cain on this one. I under estimated him.
 
Old 02-02-05, 11:21 PM   #12
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Uppin.
 
Old 02-03-05, 08:01 AM   #13
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Uppin again.

Not many people are into voting huh..
 
Old 02-03-05, 08:23 AM   #14
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Voted For: KO-Cain

Very nice battle by both @ come nices as always
Ko-Cain come deep aswell...

I felt that Cain's verse was more complex in the
way he had hott word play, Nice flow a bit choppy
at times but made up for it.

@ droped nice and would have beaten a lot of
people with this verse but I just felt that Cain
a bit more deeper.

@'s best linez....
I guess i know how the teeriost's of a plane were thinking
damn!! spiritually we must be linking
cause I could of been the pilot that day
I would of found it fun,to end my life that way
^I felt you close the verse up really nices with this
good drop man.

Cains best linez..
People dont always go, by what they say..
I heard story's, but to have it happen, I'm in dismay..
I wished the way his face looked, would drift away..
Fuck it, I wish I just forgot the whole fucking day..
^Floorless flow, nice word play great verse.

Both come really dope stay up,...

Vote ~ Cain
 
Old 02-03-05, 10:36 AM   #15
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Voted For: KO-Cain

I think that KO-Cain got this battle because i feel that KO-Cain came stronger in the following categories...Topic i felt KO-Cain got it was effective and was on point @ u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion rhyming i felt went to KO-Cain good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to KO-Cain and flow and structure i'll give to KO-Cain.

V/KO-Cain There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly...within 5 days (normally 3 days but battle hasn't started yet) and yo nice job for a new guy
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