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Old 07-20-02, 05:13 PM   #1
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The Evil City

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tHE SON FALLS BELOW THE HORIZON AGAIN IT WILL RISE/HOW MANY DAYS MUST I SURVIVE WITHOUT FEELIN ALIVE/BENEATH MY BLACKENED EYES/ LIES A SOUL SO BROKEN/ RAGE HAS RAVAGED MY HEART AS IT SITS TORN OPEN/ UNDER THE THE SMOGGY SKY IS A CITY OF SINNERS/ IT SEEMED I SLUMBERRED DURING SUMMER AND AWOKE' IN THE WINTER/ THE FREEZING BREEZE HITS MY SKIN WITH UNSYMPATHETIC RAGE/ MY EXISTANCE HAS BECOME AN APATHECTIC DAZE/ BEGGARS BEG FOR CHANGE/PROSTITUES SELL SEX/ BRUISES FROM THEIR PIMPS AND HICKEYS ON THEIR NECKS/ GANGSTAS CARRY TECHS/ YOUNG GIRLS TAKE X / A DEAD MAN LIES IN THE ALLEY WITH 3 HOLES IN HIS CHEST/ COPS ARREST SUSPECTS/ I CANT DIGEST IT YOU GUESSED IT/ THESE STREETS ARE GANGSTA INFESTED/ WERE ALL VICTIMS OF THE CITY AND IN NEED OF ASSISTACE I CLOSE MY DOOR AS I LISTEN TO SIRENS IN THE DISTANCE...
THE EVIL CITY
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Old 07-21-02, 07:36 AM   #2
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damn man....this was raw and hard hitting for sure...really felt it hard and deep... - all around darkness is seen, many 'faces', and many 'figures'...but amidst it all...there is a ray of light...within and outside...the strong usually find it one way or the other...the weak usually devoured by the darkness.... - ...

...respect...

oh yeah - lose the caps, cos its harder to read and all that...
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Old 07-21-02, 03:22 PM   #3
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yo varentao i appreciate the respect ...thanks for reviewing that! i like your stuff too with your murdrerous dark natured jackal...
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