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Old 02-01-05, 07:30 AM   #1
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Mad Dog vs Effect

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Old 02-01-05, 07:32 AM   #2
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Mad Dog has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-01-05 07:32 AM.
 
Old 02-01-05, 07:32 AM   #3
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Effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-01-05 07:32 AM.
 
Old 02-01-05, 07:47 AM   #4
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*Bout Time I Merk This Kids Ass Again*

Aight stop PM'ing people all the time...take a rest,
16 and still gettin bullied really no wonder you stressed,
No one likes ya text so when you switched to audio,
Peeps made threads bashin the shit that u thought had dope flow,
And don't get it twisted coz people here they don't hate,
It's just the shit you spits wack so give up for Christs Sake,
Coz ya rhyming resembles more like kids who disfigured,
I seen better writtens than rejected thrown away scriptures,
Get the picture?...you shoulda stopped talkin shit,
After i "Broke Them Bones" when i put out "SinnerBitch",

*Merking Over*
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furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born

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i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.

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Old 02-01-05, 07:47 AM   #5
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yo mad dog just needs to die I wanna put him down but first im'a make him commit suicide
he's gonna dick ride it's obviouse this bitch always has a problem he's not on my side
he's getting flipped and turned like the tide he's rather suck a dick and just slide
im leavin ya wired kid your talent is nothing to me think your off your dog chain ha
this dude needs to have no head like kurtcobain needs shipping off to spain
mutha fuckers got herbies the sad act is just a herbie and sometimes a little nervie
i'm about to derve him like a plate this guy is as soft as a girls brand new toy herbie
cmon you punk give your best shot and get your ass jumped I like to kill chumps
making you run miles like forest gump hold my ass on your face so I can take a dump
just shut the fuck up always claiming your acusations please change your stations
your just mad cause im better and when battleing I always win the invasions
im'a strangle this puppy with his own leash cook the dog into his mothers keesh
killing your friends on scenes you being gay is your only difference between me
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Old 02-01-05, 08:23 AM   #6
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Voted For: Mad Dog

Mad Dog - Good spit, have seen better from ya, but ya didnt need to drop hot.

Best Line - Coz ya rhyming resembles more like kids who disfigured,
I seen better writtens than rejected thrown away scriptures,

Worst Line - Get the picture?...you shoulda stopped talkin shit,
After i "Broke Them Bones" when i put out "SinnerBitch",

Effect - Iight spit, you had some good punches in there, but your flow was off.

Best Line - cmon you punk give your best shot and get your ass jumped I like to kill chumps
making you run miles like forest gump hold my ass on your face so I can take a dump

Worst Line - mutha fuckers got herbies the sad act is just a herbie and sometimes a little nervie
i'm about to derve him like a plate this guy is as soft as a girls brand new toy herbie

OVERALL - Iight battle here, but Mad Dog gets my vote, he had the better overall verse. Effect, your flow was all over the place and your punches were lackin' - work on that, stay up.

Vote - Mad Dog
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Old 02-01-05, 11:20 AM   #7
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upping for votes..................................
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Old 02-02-05, 04:16 AM   #8
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furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born

^ Amen Brother ^

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i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.

R.I.P OMB

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Old 02-02-05, 04:30 AM   #9
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alright. effect you got merked for real. look at your structure man compared to Mad Dogs. your lines are so heavily stretched. its not a very good impression. you needa make ya lines look like mad dogs alright. punches were lacking as were personals. your alright but you just need to practice more.

mad dog your good. dope verse bro tight punches. good structure. flow was a bit faded in some places but overall good shit you will win.
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Old 02-02-05, 10:10 AM   #10
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furthermore, june 3rd is the only good day to be born

^ Amen Brother ^

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i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.

R.I.P OMB

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Old 02-02-05, 11:32 AM   #11
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Voted For: Mad Dog

aight well... this was a long over due battle in my oppinion... so... here is my break down...:

Effect- well kid its like this... structure i feel was ass, it was stretched out as fuck! although you kept it consistant throughout so thats a good thing and it didnt hurt your flow to much except for the fact that it was stretched out... punches really were hit and miss, you had a couple of ok ones in there but nothing spectacular to speak of really... personals were another story, they were really non existant... vocab was aight and metas could use some work... overall this was an OK drop and i respect that you finaly steped up to m-dog... 5/10

M-dog- aight man here it goes... i really liked the structure cause im a big fan of centering it cause it presents the verse well... flow was tight throughout the verse. punches were good but could have been a little better i belive... personals were kick ass tho! i personaly liked the closer about "sinnerbitch" cause that was a tight song in my opinion... vocab was real good... using words like disfigured and scriptures, tight! metas were aight. no multis but thats aight... overall sweet drop man... 8/10


aight now... no hate at all to effect/sinner cause you came at Mdog and i gotta respect that. im glad this battle finaly wend down but i gotta give it to M-dog because his verse was just all around better... sinner work on your structure dawg, dont stretch it out so much cause that will hurt you a lot in text battling... no hate at all to either of you but this was a tight battle and its about time it went down!

Aight so good battle...

VOTE- M-Dog
 
Old 02-02-05, 12:40 PM   #12
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you both suck .
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Old 02-02-05, 01:13 PM   #13
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Old 02-02-05, 10:47 PM   #14
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Voted For: Mad Dog

No one likes ya text so when you switched to audio,
Peeps made threads bashin the shit that u thought had dope flow,
^^this was the best punch in the battle... ha ha lmao... Effect you didn't come to hard and your lines were way too stretched, some of your lines were off flow-wise... Mad Dog you took this one easily, you had punches and a good flow and some nice metaphors.. you came str8 to the point and took the win easily..
you got this one..
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Old 02-02-05, 11:04 PM   #15
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Voted For: Mad Dog

I thought this battle is pretty wack....but the vote goes to mad dog for actually dissing his opponent creatively, and mad dog had some personals too.

Effect- omg your lines are wayyyyyyy too stretched, heard you rap really fast in audio but it's different in text. Stop putting in so many swearwords it's just herbish. Your punches ain't hitting too hard.

Overall I voted for Mad dog for having harder hitting punches
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