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Old 02-04-05, 11:25 PM   #1
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This Is My Gangsta Diary
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this is my Gangsta Diary

Verse 1
From Day 1 i was on the block, i grew to become a GANGSTA
from the home of the real niggas, were thugs ill SHANK YA
it was 95 Degree's out, the corner was BLAZ'N
we had violent heroes, NWA is who we PRAIS'N
bricks was on the dash so i stashed 'em and RAN
cops found the aband'ned truck, but they still sniffed da GRAMS
why would i tel you a lie, dis is ma LIFE
the way we live in south sentral, nigga its LIFE

didnt feel like typin da rest, upp'n dis
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Old 02-04-05, 11:31 PM   #2
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that was aiight.

Seemed a little basic tho. There is a lot more you can do wiv that.

There wasnt any real wordplay, multi-rhyming, or anything complex
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Old 02-04-05, 11:33 PM   #3
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iight, thnx for da feed

uppin dis yall
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Old 02-05-05, 01:55 AM   #4
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uppin dis yall..............................
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Old 02-05-05, 01:58 AM   #5
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i would have to agree with dex..i thought i was goona see a whole lot of shit from you..but i guess ya not..elavation is what ya need fam..ya got da lyrics down but ya dont know how to put them in a bar..feel me..this was Alright
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Old 02-05-05, 02:02 AM   #6
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thats shits pretty good
but u need a lil bit more work on it like
complexity, multi-rhyming
return tha favor please
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Old 02-05-05, 05:36 PM   #7
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yeah learn how ta get your shit togetha before you go runnin ur mouth bout how wack someone else is wanksta
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