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freestyle off my head
IP: 9306 E5EC
Me against u is a "SHORT" match like Gary Coleman vs. Emmanuel Lewis
Cuz i could shoot like Rae Carruth or stab 2 mcees like Ray Lewis Mcees look like Janet Reno wit leperacy And make ya cells sickle more than Mobb Deep and TLC My rhymes goes back to tha Neolithic Era Got mcees who can't hear and searching for tha mic like Helen Keller I get wild like a Source Awards Brawl Your style smells like shit so "Where's tha lysol U couldn't touch me if I was a touch-dial phone I copy ya style and make sound better like i was ya clone Even if u was from Bone, U still couldn't get Bizzy Tha only than that seperats me from u is a gap like Madonna's teeth I rap into a thermoneter blow tha mercury cuz i'm off tha Farahenheight I choke and beat down kids like I was Bobby Knight U couldn't flex a mic if u was on LL's arm I trigger mcees like napalm in my palm U couldn't Shyne if u was a Bad Boy U couldn't bless tha mic if ya name was Pastor Troy My lyrics are like Halle Berry's cars wit Firestones on them I trap mcees in tha net and I load them This nigga has no feet and trying to kick rhymes wit me While he probably couldn't define tha intinals M.C. Even in a jungle you still couldn't get wild I take 3 b###hes out, like ya name was Destiny's Child Even if I was ya balance I wouldn't support ya Ya don't mix like Hitler wearing a yamaca U couldn't go against my style like Tommy Hilfinger vs. Ecko I Boss 20 mexican in 1 car like there name was Paco U couldn't pick my style like Eryakha Badu's hair Ask Marion Berry, I got more CRACKs than he was tha mayor Even if ya name was fingaz u still couldn't feel me Cuz I scratch mcees like a DJ wit herpes Matta fact I skip mcees like a scratch cd I do tag team jackings wit George Michael and Pee Wee I pull emcees down like a horny chicks panties on first dates Is thats why u b###hin that my lines raped An emcee with no skills with a pen needing refills With no ink or thought to think empty minds seek pills To get high on the lines but never reading in between You're staring at screens looking for ghosts in your dreams U couldn't process my lyrics if i was a Pentium I do excersing ass rippings like Richard Simmons I exorcise these fake demons with their heavy breathing But they still cant rhyme on point like they nailed crucified screaming I beat mceees present to past-tense Cuz they couldn't see tha light if they was Pharoahe Monch and Common Sense
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IP: 9306 E5EC
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IP: 9306 E5EC
Come on ppl i need some feedback
will return favor ......................uppin....................... ......
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IP: 9306 E5EC
come on ppl ill return the favor
i just need some feedback
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IP: 9306 E5EC
upppppppiiiiiiinnnnnnn for feedback
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IP: D76D 1DF1
yeah im feelin it, im not sure bout 'i copy yur style' but dats just me, i spit my own shit. but im feelin it dogg.
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IP: 9306 E5EC
thx for the feedback
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IP: D282 66C5
I Liked That You Used Alot Of References
Okay Flow....Could Be Better Structure But I Liked It Thought Keep Doin What U Doin
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They say I'm Krazi-Insane, Cause I'll Set Ya Body In Flames, Split Ya Brain, And Eat Ya Heart To Start My Day -Krazi-Insane Go To War Wit Da Mormons, Take A Bath Wit Da Catholics, In Holy Water, No Wonder They Tryna Hold Me Under Longer -Eminem The Weed Can't Get No Better -Bizzy Bone ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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IP: 2437 C278
thx for the feedback
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IP: 0075 C131
the structure of the song was a bit off but all in all i liked this piece... some pretty good refrences to things you dont hear all the time.... repeated some words too much like mcees but it was off the dome anyway...... keep writin
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