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Old 07-21-02, 04:39 PM   #1
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Week 8 (1-1) Uniqk Vs (1-1) Lil Dallas

IP: D385 5AAC

VERSES DUE FRIDAY MIDNIGHT

30 LINE MAX

NEW RULE


MUST SIGN IN BY WEDNESDAY,OR YOU LOSE


MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR 3 VOTES WILL BE DEDUCTED
 
Old 07-21-02, 04:58 PM   #2
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Old 07-22-02, 01:11 AM   #3
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check it...
 
Old 07-23-02, 10:10 PM   #4
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I'ma wait for this nigga to post his verse then split him up real nice. Without feedin. Rep you gonna have one for the top 40 out of here.
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Old 07-24-02, 11:40 PM   #5
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juss alil summin summin

Dallas win by popular demand..? Sorry but you lost this ballet..
I'll turn "dallas backwards" and let R. kelly toss this *sallad*...
many die in this game...and where ya from..death penalty comes often...
You think your "the shit"...cuz your always wit "pooh" like christopher robin...
you gave ya mic a "check" western union... look how long the mic took...
Chop off ya left leg so you could get off on the right foot...
You want imagery..?..fine...i'll rip your artieries so u cant pump blood...
siskel could *jerk off* to your album...but you wouldn't get a *thumb up*...
The difference is simple...Im the medias eye and u juss get mere looks...
Cuz uNiQK got *everybodys pic*...like school yearbooks...
Ya lines are like Metal in my "reign"...cuz if youve seen em..their rustin...
And you must be *Irish*...cuz in your mouth...my penis is *dublin*...

lol...jussed some humor to finish it off...
commence
 
Old 07-25-02, 09:35 AM   #6
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in rap batts, you like a lobster in a crab shack... out of ya' place, that shit's just an apparent fact... get it togetha nigga, look at ya verse, you coherently whack... and I know this, I bustin that ass since way back... b4 the operation, b4 all that... I beat you like Tina, and bounced like yo rap career... if you was fear itself & came in stealth, still wouldn't be feared... victory you miles from, son you ain't near... I be the car, the headlights, you be the dear, get the picture here?... I'm fearin you ain't hearin this lyrical storm adhereing to yo' ass... betta duck and cover pray it to pass... Uniqk couldn't be street if he changed the name to concrete... which he should cuz his flow is stagnant... I'ma rip you loose so bad in the afterlife, your soul is turned away by Heaven's doctor for bein a faggot... sendin you mental anguish... get the dick out of yo anus, it'll help ya flow... too hard to spit wit ya head burried in pillow... still though, two niggas in Jersey shouldn't beef like this... but I had to, cuz you usin Winnie the Pooh and a cartoon diss... if you swung for victory wit that, on the real, big fuckin miss...
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Old 07-25-02, 09:45 AM   #7
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lol....litle dallas said he was gona wait or Unigk to post his verse and then wasnt gonna feed off him. It appears that Lil d's last line is playing off Uniqk verse...well done cock buffer.


Anyway, Vote=Uniqk
Uniqk's punches were hunny and the wordplay was nice. Punches hit harder and were more diretc. The R. Kelley line was nice. The flow was off at points in Lil ds verse w as well. it comes down to this.

Flow-Uniqk
Punches-Uniqk
Wordplay-Uniqk
Mulits/inners-N/A
Overall-Uniqk
 
Old 07-25-02, 09:50 AM   #8
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seems like d/r or haten but 1-0
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Old 07-25-02, 10:27 AM   #9
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uNiQK

- Chop off ya left leg so you could get off on the right foot...

I'm surprised I never heard that line before. Nice.

- And you must be *Irish*...cuz in your mouth...my penis is *dublin*...

Hotness.

LilDallas

- I be the car, the headlights, you be the dear, get the picture here?...

That could have been nice. But that was really forced.

- but I had to, cuz you usin Winnie the Pooh and a cartoon diss...
- if you swung for victory wit that, on the real, big fuckin miss...

That's real nice. But you said you wouldn't feed his verse?

No beef to Lil D, but all I really was feeling was the last two lines and those were both direct feeds. In battles I think it should be cool to feed off someone's verse, but you said that you wouldn't. So... my vote goes to uNiQK. Keep your head up.
 
Old 07-25-02, 11:26 AM   #10
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Flow-LilDallas
Punches-Uniqk
Wordplay-Uniqk
Multis-erm,uniqk
Overall-Uniqk

lil dallas,ya verse was okay,had a nice flow n all,but i think it needs to be set out a bit better. Had sum nice ideas, and sum iight wordplay npunches,but i didnt think they were had enuff to match uniqks verse overall.

VOTE = UNIQK
 
Old 07-25-02, 12:16 PM   #11
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Uniqk had some nice punches, Lil didn't have very good punched, especially after feeding off of Uniqks verse, after he said he wouldn't lol

Uniqk flowed better, and Lil tried to Force alot of stuff in

My vote: Uniqk
 
Old 07-25-02, 12:58 PM   #12
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uNiQK - Dallas win by popular demand..? Sorry but you lost this ballet..
I'll turn "dallas backwards" and let R. kelly toss this *sallad*...

good opening

The difference is simple...Im the medias eye and u juss get mere looks...
Cuz uNiQK got *everybodys pic*...like school yearbooks...

nice

Lil dallas- I be the car, the headlights, you be the dear, get the picture here?

had a good concept but didnt quite get the wording right
and that was it

uNiQK had better punches that hit harder, wordplay was better and overall uniqk won it

VOTE=UNIQK
 
Old 07-25-02, 01:09 PM   #13
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5-0...uNiQK..onwards
 
Old 07-25-02, 03:06 PM   #14
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good battle, both came good, good flo for both, lil dallas had some aight punches:

victory you miles from, son you ain't near... I be the car, the headlights, you be the dear

but they didnt come so hard, so my vote goes to uniqk cuz he had nicer punches, which haf already been stated already.

vote:uniqk
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Old 07-25-02, 03:45 PM   #15
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Vote:~ UNIQK

basically the same reasons as everyone else.
dallas you said you wouldnt feed but you did.
uniqk showed room for improvement, but still
won this comfortably.

FlOW:~ LiL D
PuncheS:~ UniQk
wordplay: UniqK:~ especially this line

V V V V V

Quote:
Originally posted by uNiQK
And you must be *Irish*...cuz in your mouth...my penis is *dublin*...


/\ /\ /\

LMAO

keep elevatin both of y'all.
 
 


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