Yeah I'm Up In Dis Bitch/ Sittin Spittin Dis Shit/ Go By Da Name Of Krazi-Insane/
U Say Ya Rhymes Wild? I'll Leave Em Tame/ All Heads Turned When Through Dat Door I Came/I'm Here To Explain Some Things/ Such As Don't Fuck Wit Me Or You'll Hang Like A Runaway Slave/ I'm Sixteen Wit Six Fiends Who Want Six Rocks, One Each/ Niggas Want Da Ass/ "Sorry I Think I'll Pass"/ I'm A Bitch Wit Class/ And Remember Me Cause I'm Da First, Da Only, And Da Last.................

What Yall Think???

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They say I'm Krazi-Insane, Cause I'll Set Ya Body In Flames, Split Ya Brain, And Eat Ya Heart To Start My Day

-Krazi-Insane

Go To War Wit Da Mormons, Take A Bath Wit Da Catholics, In Holy Water, No Wonder They Tryna Hold Me Under Longer

-Eminem

The Weed Can't Get No Better

-Bizzy Bone

Uppin For Some Feed

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They say I'm Krazi-Insane, Cause I'll Set Ya Body In Flames, Split Ya Brain, And Eat Ya Heart To Start My Day

-Krazi-Insane

Go To War Wit Da Mormons, Take A Bath Wit Da Catholics, In Holy Water, No Wonder They Tryna Hold Me Under Longer

-Eminem

The Weed Can't Get No Better

-Bizzy Bone

im feelin this shit
good flow good structure
u need to work on vocab a lil
but it still sounds tight
good drop
return tha favor

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Could I Get Sum More Feed Back Plz.......................?

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They say I'm Krazi-Insane, Cause I'll Set Ya Body In Flames, Split Ya Brain, And Eat Ya Heart To Start My Day

-Krazi-Insane

Go To War Wit Da Mormons, Take A Bath Wit Da Catholics, In Holy Water, No Wonder They Tryna Hold Me Under Longer

-Eminem

The Weed Can't Get No Better

-Bizzy Bone

Oh And Here's Two Recent Replies To Open Mics

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175112

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175195

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They say I'm Krazi-Insane, Cause I'll Set Ya Body In Flames, Split Ya Brain, And Eat Ya Heart To Start My Day

-Krazi-Insane

Go To War Wit Da Mormons, Take A Bath Wit Da Catholics, In Holy Water, No Wonder They Tryna Hold Me Under Longer

-Eminem

The Weed Can't Get No Better

-Bizzy Bone

Ya'll Niggaz Can't Give Me No FeedBack Though?????

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They say I'm Krazi-Insane, Cause I'll Set Ya Body In Flames, Split Ya Brain, And Eat Ya Heart To Start My Day

-Krazi-Insane

Go To War Wit Da Mormons, Take A Bath Wit Da Catholics, In Holy Water, No Wonder They Tryna Hold Me Under Longer

-Eminem

The Weed Can't Get No Better

-Bizzy Bone