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Old 07-21-02, 04:43 PM   #1
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Week 8 (0-0) Burna Vs (0-0) Shotta

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VERSES DUE FRIDAY MIDNIGHT

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MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR 3 VOTES WILL BE DEDUCTED
 
Old 07-21-02, 06:38 PM   #2
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checkin in....Shotta its a rap for u
 
Old 07-21-02, 10:18 PM   #3
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haha ok checkin in
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Old 07-24-02, 12:53 PM   #4
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here we go....

Oh shit I think its over for you burna//
When u read dis, I will haf u signin ‘I will survive’ like you was tina turner//
Come on son you like a yung driver, still on ya learnas//
An when I decide ta kill this cat, yu wont see me charged wid attempted murder//

He a gay nigga always spittin an actin like a fruit//
Sensitive thug, cud probably catch him cryin over a book of chicken soup//

Teeth are rotten cuz u doin too much bitin//
My advise to you burna, is dat next year u take a course in Creative writin//

Den come an see me//
An just watch tha nine leave ya body spinnin like a CD//

Only whips yu ride got bells on it//
Soun like tha intro to special delivery, it got bells on it//

When you think of Shotta you think of getting shot//
When ya gurl think of Shotta she think of getting fuct//

Beatin me dog you movin away further and further//
Like mah neck and mah wrist dog, you getting colder an colder//

Son yu strait garbage//
An I aint talking bout Nintendo when I say im loadin a cartridge//

Been playin football from lets say three//
Dis cat gotta ta study hard when he was goin face me, im like tha S.A.T//

Fagget cat probably got thongs underneath//
An tha only time he experience pleasure is when his moms underneath//

Im telling you, you got matched up wid da wrong nigga//
Dis will be tha last time you fuck wid Shotta aka J.A. Skilaz//

imma see if i can find three battles to vote on rite now...
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Old 07-25-02, 12:30 PM   #5
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lets do dis

ima vet spittin out there kid, u cant beat those//
only thing u beat is ya meat in ya street clothes//

if you wished shotta it wouldnt be hope//
even if ya name was "cocaine" u still wouldnt be dope//

ya tech dont squirt//
ill get charged wit cruelty to animals when i shoot da rhino of ya ecko shirt//

betta watch out kid when u see me spittin, run//
i got trigga itchin gunz while u got insufficient funds//

ill shoot u kid wit no hesitation//
so when ya t-shirt wet it aint gon be from prespiration//

try on these bullets and see if u fit this//
neva "no-showed" but shotta is still on da bitch list//

u wunna talk about gunz come on kid i got those//
and when i say shells i aint talkin bout tacos//

shotta u neva bust ya gun like a sworn cop//
u a bastard, closest thing u eva came to a dad was "corn pops"//

u dont get money, come kid lets be fa rill//
closest thing u eva came to a mil.....is A.M.I.L.//

ya verse was wack shotta..dam i hate duds//
i'll put da burna to ya mouth son and burn ya taste buds//

get over it, we do not mix//
when i put da burna to ya feet is da only time u'll have "hot kix"

that guy on my shoulder, tellin me to blast it//
ill put da burna to ya chest dog, and turn u into ashes//

das rite ill take ya soul//
even if u had a x-box remote, u couldnt take control//

forget about that cocky stuff//
even if i lit ya rhymes on fire, they wouldnt be "hot" enough//

these mags will blow ya chest away//
and i got hollow tips, so u could put dat vest away//

holla at ya boy
 
Old 07-25-02, 12:31 PM   #6
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uppin for votes
 
Old 07-25-02, 03:00 PM   #7
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uppin
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Old 07-25-02, 05:00 PM   #8
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This battle was weak as fuck....no quotables from this shit....

I give it to Burna cause he was less as weak....

Vote=Burna

This shit was still borin' as hell and I would've just dissed both verses but there's a rule against that and so I voted...

Burna
 
Old 07-25-02, 06:48 PM   #9
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both battles were kinda simple on the volcab but strong with punches i'd have to give my vote to shotta though just hit more personal
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Old 07-25-02, 09:25 PM   #10
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Vote\Burna

Both verses absolutley sucked. Flow was off in both verses, no punches...I couldv sworn this was a played line/filler expo. Both verses were elementary as fuck. Burna edges this out because his lines sucked a lil less. But he used, if youre name was cocaine you ewouldnt be dope? are you fuckin kiddin me!?!? you cant think of anything better!?!? You guys should drop out of this and go improve....werk out yah style, et some complexity and then return to challenge
 
Old 07-26-02, 04:47 AM   #11
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Eh.. kinda a weak battle.. Burna came harder..Metaphors were better, punchs were harder...

Both need work tho on hard ish, and your rhyme schemes...Damn you two really need work with those to accually flow..

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ima vet spittin out there kid, u cant beat those//
only thing u beat is ya meat in ya street clothes//

if you wished shotta it wouldnt be hope//
even if ya name was "cocaine" u still wouldnt be dope//


Took it for me..

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Old 07-26-02, 07:18 AM   #12
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Shotta...
Gloria Gaynor performed "I Will Survive" didn't she? Anyway, your verse was pretty simple. Could have used some multis for flow purposes. The most glaring flaw was that there was minimal wordplay. The exception was...

An I aint talking bout Nintendo when I say im loadin a cartridge
Eh. At least it was an attempt. Keep working at it.

Burna...
Not a great verse, but a little better than Shotta's. There were some nice multis, and some decent wordplay such as...

ya tech dont squirt//
ill get charged wit cruelty to animals when i shoot da rhino of ya ecko shirt//
That line won the battle for you.

Vote: Burna

Peace
 
Old 07-26-02, 09:09 AM   #13
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yall are crazy, i dont see how the battle was weak, i kno some of my verses werent that great, but i kno the battle wasnt weak.

1-4 uppin for votes

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Old 07-26-02, 09:25 AM   #14
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Mc4eyez, tina turner also sang dat song. look it up.
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Old 07-26-02, 11:36 AM   #15
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4th vote.( i'm such a nice guy)
BREAK DOWN!!!!

Oh shit I think its over for you burna//
When u read dis, I will haf u signin ‘I will survive’ like you was tina turner//
^^^nice opener, but does tina really sing that? i thought it was someone else, oh well, nice.
Come on son you like a yung driver, still on ya learnas//
An when I decide ta kill this cat, yu wont see me charged wid attempted murder//
^^^^^^^BLAH

He a gay nigga always spittin an actin like a fruit//
Sensitive thug, cud probably catch him cryin over a book of chicken soup//
^^^^^nice,

Teeth are rotten cuz u doin too much bitin//
My advise to you burna, is dat next year u take a course in Creative writin//
^^^^^LOL, good suggestion

Den come an see me//
An just watch tha nine leave ya body spinnin like a CD//
^^^blah

Only whips yu ride got bells on it//
Soun like tha intro to special delivery, it got bells on it//
^^^^^^^ummmmm no

When you think of Shotta you think of getting shot//
When ya gurl think of Shotta she think of getting fuct//
^^^^^^nope

Beatin me dog you movin away further and further//
Like mah neck and mah wrist dog, you getting colder an colder//
^^^^^^^BLAH

Son yu strait garbage//
An I aint talking bout Nintendo when I say im loadin a cartridge//
^^^^^^6nice,

Been playin football from lets say three//
Dis cat gotta ta study hard when he was goin face me, im like tha S.A.T//
^^^^^^BLAH

Fagget cat probably got thongs underneath//
An tha only time he experience pleasure is when his moms underneath//
^^^^^^6stop tryin to rhyme with the same words

Im telling you, you got matched up wid da wrong nigga//
Dis will be tha last time you fuck wid Shotta aka J.A. Skilaz//
^^^^^^nope

NEXT!!!

ima vet spittin out there kid, u cant beat those//
only thing u beat is ya meat in ya street clothes//
^^^^^nope

if you wished shotta it wouldnt be hope//
even if ya name was "cocaine" u still wouldnt be dope//
^^^^played

ya tech dont squirt//
ill get charged wit cruelty to animals when i shoot da rhino of ya ecko shirt//
^^^^^^^nice...very nice

betta watch out kid when u see me spittin, run//
i got trigga itchin gunz while u got insufficient funds//
^^^^nope

ill shoot u kid wit no hesitation//
so when ya t-shirt wet it aint gon be from prespiration//
^^^^^iight

try on these bullets and see if u fit this//
neva "no-showed" but shotta is still on da bitch list//
^^^^^naw

u wunna talk about gunz come on kid i got those//
and when i say shells i aint talkin bout tacos//
^^^^^iight

shotta u neva bust ya gun like a sworn cop//
u a bastard, closest thing u eva came to a dad was "corn pops"//
^^^^^^^^^HELL NAW, get that gay ish outta here

u dont get money, come kid lets be fa rill//
closest thing u eva came to a mil.....is A.M.I.L.//
^^^^^^^nope
ya verse was wack shotta..dam i hate duds//
i'll put da burna to ya mouth son and burn ya taste buds//
^^^^^naw

get over it, we do not mix//
when i put da burna to ya feet is da only time u'll have "hot kix"
^^^^iight

that guy on my shoulder, tellin me to blast it//
ill put da burna to ya chest dog, and turn u into ashes//
^^^^^^fuck tha burna's

das rite ill take ya soul//
even if u had a x-box remote, u couldnt take control//
^^^^^^yada yada yada

forget about that cocky stuff//
even if i lit ya rhymes on fire, they wouldnt be "hot" enough//
^^^^^PLAYED

these mags will blow ya chest away//
and i got hollow tips, so u could put dat vest away//
^^^^nope

vote~burna
 
 


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