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Old 02-02-05, 09:03 PM   #1
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Exclamation Rappin Wit Gunz (My-Mixx)

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dis is some shit i wrote...but revised it fo yall RV people...please read dis shit wit a OPEN MIND...its been a long time but fuck it...and LEAVE FEEDBACK!!!

bang bang, naw dat aint my style...
i'd rather see u suffer and hear screams in da background...
my mental compacity full child...
all i see is money green dats how i changed my style from tha neck down...
i'll rip yo crew up...
and have ya dramatized and limpin round here like you got beat down from tha tooth up...
brain damage, now you gotta give ya bitch up...
and im stabbin tonight but dont compare me to young buck...
im different like tha foosh-nickins...
or betta yet like how chi ali was fuckin wit dem stupid bitches...
in a 6-4 steadly hittin switches...
ridin on I-75 like im a chain gang chasin snitches...
nothin is gone change here homie, im too far into dis...
my last OM aint get play so now im takin aim and shit...
GIVE FEEDBACK on dis nigga, im only uppin dis one one time...
or maybe two times, besides battlin niggaz i was built to ryhme...
so how bout you go and pick beef wit somebody else like 50 cent...
fo i come through yo hood in da black van, black tent...
{ rappin wit gunz nigga... }
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Old 02-02-05, 09:06 PM   #2
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Old 02-03-05, 10:41 AM   #3
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It Was Hot. I Would Really Be Feelin This If It Was A Audio. U Got Skillz, I Was Feelin Tha Barz. Not Really Many Punches In There, Just A Str8 Rhyme...good Shit..

Check Out Nok Fam, U Got Skillz...click Tha Link And Drop A Tryout, Or Sumthin, Or Put This Shit In There, And We'll Get Back At You
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Old 02-03-05, 11:43 AM   #4
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^^iight...i'll get 2 dat...4real
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Old 02-03-05, 12:10 PM   #5
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damn man yall beatin around da bush i posted two links and u still aint say if im in or not
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Old 02-03-05, 12:35 PM   #6
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^^^damn........
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Old 02-03-05, 02:57 PM   #7
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damn man yall beatin around da bush i posted two links and u still aint say if im in or not


that must means NOOOOO.....

as far as this piece go's....

nice drop word, straight flow * ya strongest point * but u aint have no punches or multis so this probley would sound better audio but still a good drop, feeling this drop word....

7/10 keep doing ya thing....


code steel is watching u word.......
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Old 02-03-05, 06:47 PM   #8
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alright...thanx...im watchin yall 2...lmao...more feedz please
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Old 02-03-05, 06:49 PM   #9
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and damn...since i got 2 crews watchin my moves...guess i gotta post tha remix on here...it should be up on tha weekend...look 4 it!...4real
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Old 02-03-05, 07:59 PM   #10
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I was entertained long enough to read the whole thing... so that gets you a 5 at least... lol

No but it was good and you show quite a bit of potential and fuck code steel... IE crews ain't never last very long... but I do admit they are great farm crews

NOK... cheap nock off of a wack crew.

but back to your open mic... I'll give it a 6.5/10 good work bro.
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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 02-03-05, 08:04 PM   #11
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thanx guy...much appreciated
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Old 02-03-05, 08:04 PM   #12
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mo feed yall...get at tha kid
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Old 02-04-05, 12:14 AM   #13
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i feelin this shit
u show a lot of potential
good structure
u need a lil more vocab
but overall its good
ill give it 8.5/10
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Old 02-04-05, 07:30 AM   #14
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I was entertained long enough to read the whole thing... so that gets you a 5 at least... lol

No but it was good and you show quite a bit of potential and fuck code steel... IE crews ain't never last very long... but I do admit they are great farm crews

NOK... cheap nock off of a wack crew.

but back to your open mic... I'll give it a 6.5/10 good work bro.


yea.....

u can listen to one of my long time fam who been on my dick since i can remember having it.....lollol...

but code steel is a tight crew & not my crew... *ecko crew*
and NOK is a tight crew as-well... * those are the 2 new crews that will be on-top of things.....
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^^^yeah...im wit NOK now a days...get back at me wit more feedz
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