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01-30-05, 03:13 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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Never Afraid
IP: 5043 32F4
..Never Afraid.. I aint afraid of you, why bother trying to be Scary Only jealous, so you try to defend your Disability Im sick of trying to defend you, still you Attack me Using my friends as bait, only so you can Attract me I coulda fought back, wouldn’t have got be Anywhere Now I look on the revenge, that coulda been There The times we coulda shared were gone from day One Cause of the differences we didn’t share, wasn’t Fun Trying to frighten me, off words you said from Within Day to day I studied you, it even worked, I Reckon If you don’t believe, look at how much I’ve Improved My skills show you how many ranks higher I Moved I don’t care if you got a problem with me, I aint Scared Now you got people saying you suck, must be Unfair It took time but as you can see, I practiced and it Paid People look at you like your scorny, the most Afraid There will never be an end to it, so stop Experimenting If that nagging gets out of hand, its always Upsetting So don’t make up sentence’s, I’ve already heard Before Go ahead blame me for your wrong, I always work Sore.. -Parallel |
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01-31-05, 03:27 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 3240 794D
wow, some strong words here, good shit, i like your style and this poem,very well written ,seemed like the words just poured out of you, keep it up man, you have a lot to give, and to say....1
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02-02-05, 06:59 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
thanks alot....uppin
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02-13-05, 09:48 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: B88E FC4F
Kept me focussed throughout the whole piece because you have a interesting, attracting writing style. Emotion was strong and liked how you described the process of elevation and improvement. The message came out quite good and I even read it several times because I was really feeling the things you pointed out here. Found good balance in your vocabulary to.
Good job! DQ
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02-13-05, 04:39 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
thanks alot, yea im feeling like writing something soon again
uppin |
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