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Old 07-24-02, 10:20 AM   #1
RealityLives
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very bad things verse 1 review

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sometimes i gotta zone out close my eyes and pretend/ that im not stuck on this planet chasin dust in the wind/ i got no such thing as friends and i aint down with you bitch/ see life is hard aint no way to escape Reality's grip/ they got us livin for cash and bustin guns over nothin /this is a deep discussion/ overlayed by percussion/ im sick of sinnin cuz we livin like life is lustin/ see we came into this world and we leavin with nothin/ its disgustin/ how we fuckin our lives up/ see time is critical and its time to make our minds up/ the hours pass by doves fly/ wolves cry/ bustas die/ young mothers get high offa drug supplies/ these are the days of our lives/ were infected with lies/ nobody ever tells the kids that it pays to do right/ i strike with all might and radiate like the light/ i took a vow to tell the truth when i step on the mic/
copyright 2001 eric edwards aka reality
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Old 07-25-02, 01:21 PM   #2
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hmmm....another good 'reality' piece....had some strong points...but also went a bit 'cliche' at times....but executed to the extent that it came all good in the end....and well - life is so much what it is, that cliches are inevitable - ...so its all good..

..respect..
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Old 07-26-02, 07:59 AM   #3
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Wasnt too played but seen dis sorta shit b4,
Good flow ...
Keep spittin da realness ...
Elevate,
U got much talent, keep doin ur thang!

Pz
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