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07-23-02, 02:27 PM | #1 | ||||||
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" I Hear You Callin Pt.1
IP: ADEC 56AC
I have the memory of different scents
Being consumed in dozens of wombs playing Russian roulette, first prize a cozy tomb Some I would just lay with, laugh with Some I thought I could take that eternal path wit Some were like mathematics Take the good with the bad and subtract it Potential--well, some lack it And I'm sure to some I did the same We all smiled upside down--playing the game Wishing inside this person meant more Some had me like Large Pro "Looking at the front door..." An emotional war In the end death is desensitization In the end there's nothing left But good friends and long conversations I abstained once wasn't fond of masturbation But I felt like I had to clean out my soul Make room in my fox hole One in the hand Is better than two in the bush I've been told I've held gold And the next tainted coin that passed To the highest bidder it was sold I let go Scare to hold Scare of being alone--when I'm old Scare to death of falling in love, 10 fold So like subdivision I stand beside my self And asked me What is it you really want? I ignored my questions And continue the hunt Dick getting sucked dry, fuck used cunts Laid all night Remy Red and freshly rolled blunts I bump into an ex Who propositioned me to swing an ep I looked at shorty, said nice to see you, Stay up then I stepped I remember once I would have took her up on her proposition Lay her out wet, breast covered in hot body oil glistening Exploring orifices with taste, touch, smell and vision Karma Sutra, Fung Shia, compromising positions listen... I have revamped my motive of operandi updated my mission I've grown a little older I've gained some valuable wisdom I often sit in the dark Remember ends, where they start then stopped I feel God inside of me now I suppose its time to play the part |
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07-24-02, 06:34 AM | #2 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: CE07 81DB
long stuff but nice for real this is a dope peice keep that up
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07-24-02, 01:07 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: ADEC 56AC
good lookn out keep uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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07-25-02, 01:06 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: F8DE F595
for real....i feel this real deep..and real hard...about the eventual transition...maturing if you would....of how wisdom has become your bride...and inner control is being achieved....but especially the part about 'god being within you now'...
...a very well written piece...you seem to write so 'loose'...yet somehow keep it altogether...'writing on the edge' is what i call it...known many peeps...of many 'professions' of the 'scriptures' who do it more often than not..bordering on genius and madness....keep on elevating...cos you sure producing some heavyweight pieces...and have the potential to elevate even further....(hope i am not sounding patronising)...anyway... respect... |
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