Battle Rules:

6 - 14 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-09-05 at 10:40 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

**GHOSTE** has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-06-05 10:40 PM.

read it pretty fast so u can get the flow...the flow wont be off if u read it fast enough...

ima merk dis kat, cause out of us 2, im the only real vet you see/
this fag gets *owned* so much he lost his own *will power* as an *MC*/
this dude couldn't reach my level on da *stairway to heaven*/
wit da way dis dude rhymes, im suprised if hes over 11/
actin like he need to be babied, some1 get this fag a rattle/
lazy ass aint even took the time to learn to set up a battle/*****
i doubt if this motha fucka'll even take the time to read this/
of course, id stop carin too, if i got k.o.ed by CANNIBAL FETUS/*****
been in three battles since he joined...and aint got a single vote/
thas pretty sad, since all the verses he had, was pre-wrote/*****

*****he claims he dont know how to set up a battle...
*****not only did he lose to CANNIBAL FETUS!...but he got koed 5-0...
*****he always prewrites in battles...


i came pretty basic...but its all i need...

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Mc Will Power has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-07-05 02:17 PM.

Man i'll merk u, slew u walk right through u...
Crowds they heard u and they boo'd u...
M8 u cant merk MC Will Power, cos if u try things WILL turn sour, just like the time i fucked ur bitch in the shower...
i swear u bitch had orgasms by the hour...
So next time u wanna battle me remember u bitch got fucked by a G.

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Voted For: **GHOSTE**

ehh easy to choose here......

mc will power......
up your complexity in your verse.....your structure is off....no multies.....no punches that hit.....it just wasnt a good verse man....never talk about fuckin a guys bitch....thats stuff is played out man......just come harder in your verse....think of things more complex....and use some personals.....elevate yourself.....


ghoste........
u didnt come that hard.....but definitely hard enough to get an easy KO......you punches hit pretty decent....they werent complex....but were good because some of them hit well.....u had some decent personals here....and couple of good plays off of his name....overall this was a pretty decent drop from you


vote:......goes to ghoste for more complexity....better punches....better personals....and better structure.....his verse was just overall on a whole different level than wills was......

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Voted For: **GHOSTE**

very one sided...
Ghost--
-ma merk dis kat, cause out of us 2, im the only real vet you see/
this fag gets *owned* so much he lost his own *will power* as an *MC*/
=not bad, little weak but good intro to rest of your verse 6/10
-this dude couldn't reach my level on da *stairway to heaven*/
wit da way dis dude rhymes, im suprised if hes over 11
=first line is good, maybe second line coulda played with it more, 6/10
-actin like he need to be babied, some1 get this fag a rattle/
lazy ass aint even took the time to learn to set up a battle
=nice personal, 7/10
-i doubt if this motha fucka'll even take the time to read this/
of course, id stop carin too, if i got k.o.ed by CANNIBAL FETUS
=hahaha, laughed at this one, 8/10
-been in three battles since he joined...and aint got a single vote/
thas pretty sad, since all the verses he had, was pre-wrote
=eh, okay closer, 7/10

total: 36/50....not bad, little basic as you say, but your opponent showed no fight, try addin multis you know, up the vocab, flow was nice, punches/personals got the idea just make em harder next time, keep elevatin man, good job

MC Will Power...didnt really come in this one man
-Man i'll merk u, slew u walk right through u...
Crowds they heard u and they boo'd u...
=i read and said boo...first wasnt bad, but....3/10
-M8 u cant merk MC Will Power, cos if u try things WILL turn sour, just like the time i fucked ur bitch in the shower...
i swear u bitch had orgasms by the hour...
=haha, i laughed, this is your best line, but its not that great....5/10
-So next time u wanna battle me remember u bitch got fucked by a G.
=very weak, very.....3/10

total: 11/30......man, didnt really try in this one eh, lack of flow, structure, vocab....punches didnt really hit, you werent even really insulting him, this didnt really have anythin positive, sorry man, gotta elevate alot, at least try next time....wird

vote: Ghost

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