just asking,since the last time i posted a song(very long ago) ive listen to alot of rappers on soundclick and did something to see if i elevate,fix the quality since my last songs(if you wanna see what it was like go at the bottom)

www.soundclick.com/xspitty

i left feedback on "i rather"
x rayvision,something like that
and alot more so dont worry

toy soldiers beat is easy to flow to, you could of come alot stronger with your flow. but its on point most the time.

you mumble a bit,clear your throat and speak up.
Its real lyrics, from your heart..i like that.

Quality is good,could do with less pops and cracks though.personnaly I dont feel the beat you used,simply cause its so mainstream, tyr using some underground beats,that way youll come more original

Overall its an ok track.6/10

iight thanks for the feed,finaly i dont have 4 lol,yah i know the beat is easy to flow on,but i wrott this song when the song first came out

comeone uppin,i gave enough feedback,i gave like 15 feedback in a week in the audio forum please

listenin......toy soldiers beat -easy to flow to

lyrical content is good as is vocab, flow is on beat mostly, good mixture of rhyming schemes...quality is a lot better than in the past but still not that good..

to answer you...yes you have elvated a lot...

RTF LINKS IN SIg

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thanks alot apreciate it...lol yah i like my sig too

uppin please...

Typing as I listen:

I can't answer if you elevated or not - but the flow was pretty solid. Coulda used more cadence - but that's true of nearly all the tracks I've ever heard on the net. Also, to bring your vocal clarity up - come closer to the mic, it got really clear for liek a 2 second span, then went back into the toilet. Not a bad track - but I couldn't listen to it for more than two verses (if it had a second one) out of the sheer boringness of it. Just dosen't say anything that'd keep me listening, personally. Hope this helped.

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yah it did thanks