Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-07-05 at 05:28 PM

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Non Capisco has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-07-05 05:01 PM.

phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-07-05 05:05 PM.

phive ", couldn't "murder Shit" even if he "stepped on it"
right here people.he's the poster child for a hooked on phonic*
i'm a sting to this kid . ...i "buzz "and he gets lyrical hives
i throw "punches",he thows"High Phives"do i need to try?
i'd say he was a loser . but that'd be a.... Understatment
he "ditches bitches" to play D and D* in his moms basement!



D and D dungeons and dragons

the hooked on phonics line was cuz he didnt spell his name right

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non capisco.. missin in the rap game as long as sysco,
try ta throw puches but ya miss though, gettin all wet bro,
you look like a sweating fat boy eating crisco,
thinks hes a gangsta cuz he parades with a homo,
all excited cuz richard sommons is ya promo, high pitched voice like jojo, rub fertilizer on ya nuts so they grow, capisco

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Voted For: Non Capisco

*read rules again to make sure it aint a whack battle* nah, just playing, heres how i see it

NC....thought you had some nice stuff in there, but overall, alot of it came off really weak....not bad vocab but it can be upped a little, wordplay, you kinda fell short in this category, cause alot of the lines coulda been worded a little better.....but overall on this battle, your punches did come harder than phives whack piece......keep elevating man, your shits getting better....

phive...i dunno man, you came weak here, had poor vocab and wordplay which really made it boring to read.....had bad structure and flow...stretched lines......personally, i didnt think you came close here man, you gotta elevate alot still, on everything, no hate...but your verse was weak

v/non capisco

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Voted For: Non Capisco

non capisco had a better verse all around. his bars were more organized, which means he had better structure. his punches his wayy harder, and he came wit it in metaphores. i think this was wayy too easy for you family.
phive-u had an aight verse, but i wasnt feelin it. i think u shouldve came a lil harder in punches, and maybe you wouldve had it. some of ur punches were ight, but worded bad. you had bad wordplay, and step up your vocab a lil homie. no hate, just take everything into consideration, and elevate urself.

overall-non took this one hands down. i think he had a all around better verse. this was onesided. NO hate...

JDOT

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Voted For: Non Capisco

I liked when capisco used wordplay. He also had better punches.

Favorite line:
i throw "punches",he thows"High Phives"do i need to try?

Phive bro, you gotta elevate. First off, no wordplay at all, and in a battle anyone can throw punches if they're not playing on words. That's part of the challenge. Even without using wordplay, some punches I didn't get like:
thinks hes a gangsta cuz he parades with a homo,

^^what's that?

work on flippin words from one meaning to another inside of a punch... that'll do wonders for your game

stay active and keep at it dog

Vote: Non Capisco

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Voted For: Non Capisco

easy win imo no hate phive

non got this for way harder punches and personals...every line was a punch against phive...phive your lines didnt make sense...they were just like wtf? no...but its ok just keep battling itll get better but non got this good luck to both no hate

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thanks.. i'm work'n on my rhymes haha... upppppppppppppppppppn this ...

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