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Old 01-30-05, 01:18 PM   #1
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Exclamation Aim Ya Guns

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Aim for the head when you see em go get em nicca
Aim for the head when you see em go get em nicca
Aim for the head when you see em go get em nicca
YO String let them lames know you aint playin wit em

......yeah holla at me....String is back

yall wanna pop heat, mayn these thugs neva had it
but String squeeze arms like blood pressure gadgets
yea i know i aint been on in a minute
but now im droppin jaws like its a yawn epidemic
they say Top 5 is self-glorification
ok..FUCK YALL im Top 4 in the nation
u get leg sprains, ya head grazed, when the lead blaze
only hits u ever got was off ya web-page
i take out a chunk of Mc's wit every bite
the steel, like Teddy bears, it gets squeezed every night
niggas will pay money, just to see me flow
i'll put ya in full cast, n i aint talkin bout no TV show

Aim for the head when you see em go get em nicca
Aim for the head when you see em go get em nicca
Aim for the head when you see em go get em nicca
YO String let them lames know you aint playin wit em

its gonna b a problem yall

uhh, ya flows like stale bread, they day old dude
im about to drop, n sell more in 24 hours than Halo 2
yall niggas can get halos too
cuz u talk all that shit, n neva spray those tools
u drop shit, i pop lids like tupperware
dont like what im sayin, then we can let the knuckles bare
a couple glares, i got nothin but troubled stares
for niggas who act hard, n is softer than the Snuggle bear
i'll blow up ya block, so u can see the rubble there
yall cant fill my shoes, like u put on ya big brothas Airs
hatin on me is like givin Ivory to an elephant
i really dont need it, so why u try sellin it?
pretty much all that bullshit u yappin is irrelevant
nigga, i aint nice wit the flows IM BENEVOLENT......holla

If you wanna go to war then pop somethin
If you wanna go to war then pop somethin
If you wanna go to war then pop somethin
eh YO STRING tell them lames you aint playin wit em......

THIS HAS BEEN A PSA
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Old 01-30-05, 01:44 PM   #2
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==============uppin for feed==============================
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Old 01-30-05, 01:50 PM   #3
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was feelin this................would sound ope in audio.....drop a link to this or sumin u got that might be better in The Jury forum
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Old 01-30-05, 01:56 PM   #4
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thanks for the feed acuity, uppin for more holla at me
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Old 01-30-05, 02:35 PM   #5
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yo man, nice shit nice shit, i liked everything excellent vocab, alright structure only thing i saw wrong was some of ur lines were i feel cut short and didnt express 100% of ur talent, but some how u rejuvenated ur rhyme with 8/10 and if you aint in a crew, go sign up fo tha mafia we lookin for new talent boy do it up
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Old 01-30-05, 02:38 PM   #6
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thanks for the feed mafia, uppin for more, holla at me...1
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Old 01-30-05, 08:24 PM   #7
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thanks for the feed mafia, uppin for more, holla at me...1
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Old 01-30-05, 08:59 PM   #8
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thanks for the feed mafia, uppin for more, holla at me...1
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Old 01-30-05, 09:12 PM   #9
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Old 01-30-05, 10:06 PM   #10
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thanks for the feed MA, uppin for more hto holla at me.............
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Old 01-30-05, 10:45 PM   #11
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never disapointed by shit from string... and that one dude is right, that shit would be sick on audio, you need to start audio and shit... punches, flow and eeverything was good... im always downf or syain fuck structure, lol holla
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Old 01-31-05, 08:52 AM   #12
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thanks for the feed, one step beyond, uppin for more .....holla at me peeps.....1
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Old 01-31-05, 09:17 AM   #13
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im feelin this shit man
its pretty tight
good vocab
good structure
dont cut ur lines short
overall ill give it an 8/10
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Old 01-31-05, 02:26 PM   #14
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thanks for the feed godfather, uppin for more feed back, holla at me peeps
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Old 02-02-05, 07:26 PM   #15
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uppin for more feedback, holla at me wit some honest opinions, leave links n the favor will b returned
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