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02-17-05, 09:12 PM
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This World Order
IP: BE07 6157
Here's my first drop ever, so don't judge so harshly, just say what I gotta elevate on. It's called "This World Order."
This World Order Every morning I get up to the sound of death, To cliques of G's sellin' a pound of meth, And even though I'm coppin' up new kicks, I'm still trippin', Life's gettin even more tirin', as I be sittin', Knowin' behind every tree lies bodies rot an' decayed, Not understandin' why everyone is bein' hated, Over reasons that should not be debated, While our brother and sisters are overseas, Fightin', just so we can have a chance to breathe, As we just throw life away so irrationally, If death is life's only concept, Then humanity just took a step back, And so many wrongdoings got me thinking, That we need to gain back the love we lack, As the world turns, and the day grows older, I'm just prayin' for this cold world order. Oh, here's the link..... http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1965491 EDIT:sorry...typo. Last edited by Yung_Dragon : 02-17-05 at 09:17 PM. |
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02-17-05, 09:43 PM
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IP: C024 E429
pretty good for a first drop homie- nice shit.... 7.5/10....
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02-17-05, 09:46 PM
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IP: BE07 6157
Thanks, uppin for more feedback.
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02-17-05, 09:55 PM
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Let God Be With You
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IP: 9281 C2F0
i was feelin that shit
pretty good i like the flow and i liked the vocab good drop ill give it 8/10 return tha favor link in sig thx
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02-17-05, 10:33 PM
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IP: 7D11 8CB8
Not understandin' why everyone is bein' hated,
Over reasons that should not be debated, i liked that line The rest was dope also good vocab and stayed on the subject overall it was pretty tight keep it up
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