Just a fun song I decided to do. I used one of R.V's own Ghost Emporer's beats www.sounclick.com/annodominibeats

Check it out.....shit's pretty tight

Mic Is On Fire

Leave some feedback and let me know how I did....

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listening:
Beat:already heard it , but still not bad
Flow:not bad at all
Lyrics:had difficulty hearing some some time,but from what im hearing its pretty cool
Quality: pretty good
overall not bad

return the favor at "Did i elevate"

listenin do it now. of course quality good since u made the turorial. lyrics is nice as always. flows good and i like the beat. i cant explain how i feel bout the hook. i aint feelin it but im lovin it at the same time. all together good track though

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C.S.

...Is to have Served Your Faction

Beat is OK. Sounds 80's. You need a new mic immediately. Flow was on beat for the most part - first verse was net-flow-ish in the first half. The second verse had a different flow (thankfully) and the hook was ehh okay. Nice multis in the second but flow fell apart a in some spots. Could have benefited from some trimming, like in one line you say "I bring the heat when I step on stage yo, my mic is on fire". Coulda brought that on flow by cutting it down to "Bring the heat when I'm on stage yo, mic is on fire" and it would have sounded much smoother and no one would have got any different meaning from it. Just some tricks I guess. An okay track overall - beat is proably what hurt you if anything, and that rushed-at-times flow with net flow on the first verse.

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I love the beat...........Drops in hard with them bells..

Chorus is dope....
Ug ot this old skool type sound going on with this

I like your flow, its become your trademark..it takes skill to flow at your speed and adapt to beats...

I heard 2 tracks from you in past month..u killed it on that ECKo collab about Death and here...

I thought this was dope..might just bump dis i ma car..

-8.5/10

RTF-links in sig.

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jea this shit is pretty hot..still iffy on the voice and the beat....but this shit is pretty fuckin dope..you elevated alot...and this beat is fuckin fire...im feelin it to shit..songs like this is the reason why i make new songs...gives me a challenge......so..now im going to make a new song.......this song is pretty dope im feelin it....work on ur pronounciation too...i can hear u but u dont pause and that shit is soo fast u have to like listen closely through da whole song....but overall this was hot i give it a
7.5/10

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can you leave feed on my song please,... stay like you are

the beat is pretty dope..ya flow was iight you just fell off on some parts..and you was way too fast be..the tempo of the beat aint so fast..if you would of slowed down a bit it would of been a good flow..lyrics pretty good..some gay ass line i heard though..grabbin my nipple?.lol..thats all you be..i'd rate this track a 6.5/10 due to ya weird lyrics and yo tempo could of been slowed down be...other then that keep'em comin..and if you have free time peep these threads and leave feedback..

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1960591
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1960593

1ne,...

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yeah...
flow was good...sometimes it was kinda hard to know what you were sayin...
the beat was tight...the bells sounded tight...lol...
you lyrikal content was aight...you had a few good metas in there...
dope shit man...the hook was kinda wierd...but yet it was good...

8.5/10 keep it up dogg

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