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Old 02-19-05, 03:00 PM   #1
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freeeeeee verse...

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this is an audio jawn I did to "Blood Money Part1 - Capone and Noreaga" that actually started out as a text cypher but was re-worked to fit the bit more eXactly...don't like how it sounds audio-wise so I figured I'd post it here and see what ya'll think of it...and don't go find the beat and try to spit it; you're a text head, you can't do it ...

complexity personified I’m spittin’ lines of my rhymes
just to pass the time and they’re surpassing time
fall back to soak it in and then begin again
renewal from within like I got a iLLer twin
at light speed and faster, I’m causing a disaster
from my box of alabaster, I’m preaching to the pastor
cookin' heat in the kitchen, and I ain't talkin' 'bout some chicken
stricken with sickness you pray to trees like you’re Wiccan
no busting 45s, toting knives, and all these lies
‘cause the more lies told the less is the toll
you better behold ‘cause this is truth for the soul
I’m breaking the mold and I’m taking all control
super sonic pneumonic devices make me vomit
chronic demonic Satanic to Heavenly flows
that’s the way it goes when it’s sin without the “know”
like people without souls and Adam with no clothes
truth in the booth, skills like a Nosferatu tooth
sicker than the average like teens on heavy beverage
nigga either it way it goes I’m murderous with it
and killing ‘em slowly like Newport cancer sticks
these niggas can’t pop shit like they got a 2-inch dick
turn a ho into a house wife, like Jada I’m askin’ “why”
these kats must wanna die…too worried about head
but the “burn up” leave you dead like bodies filled with lead
frail body, stale mind, would you be so kind…
“before the pain begins and eats away at my skin
caves in my chin, brittles down my young shins
"take me from this misery”…that’s what you’ll be asking
vacuum ya soul to end existence before it begins
that’s reversing tactics, but somehow still as drastic


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"my perfect bitch" by: Unknown prospecT
"ahead of my time (the paradox)" by: Blackmage
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LV - real talk as usual..dope shit
you're like the best story teller over a beat

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my whole album is inspired by you LV.
thats how i got this classic album.

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Old 02-19-05, 07:31 PM   #2
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Your name is dope

The yellow font...ISNT tho

The freestyle was straight tho'

Decent wordplay here n there, flowed well, structure was a little choppy, but it was pretty dope ta read


Return the fave in my open mic called Look Mom

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Old 02-19-05, 09:13 PM   #3
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the yellow looks good on the blue 8-)...the flows is perfect with the beat it's too, you just gotta spit some things at different speeds, once I get a better mic and work on my clarity I'ma re-do EVERYTHING that I've dropped audio stEEz...and thanx for the reply; though I hate reading and that's why I do audio, if I'm really bored I'll go check you out, lol...
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LV - real talk as usual..dope shit
you're like the best story teller over a beat

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my whole album is inspired by you LV.
thats how i got this classic album.
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Old 02-19-05, 09:14 PM   #4
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yo i c that u mentioned my open mic "Complexity" in there good to know u a fan u were good it all rhymed and had some good punchlines, "Like Adam with no clothes" that's my fav. but thing that was missing was multi's it was everything but complexity it did have have a few though but not enough work on those and you'll be magic
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Old 02-19-05, 09:17 PM   #5
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ummmm no...I didn't mention shit from you, iono yuo jakk...this was written like 2 months aGo, lol...
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LV - real talk as usual..dope shit
you're like the best story teller over a beat

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my whole album is inspired by you LV.
thats how i got this classic album.
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Old 02-19-05, 10:18 PM   #6
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i bet hood dogg feels stupid lol......


this was tight man, nice content and pretty original, keep doing ya thing man
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Old 02-19-05, 10:49 PM   #7
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lol i do cuz i got a open mic called "complexity" and u started out with that so it sounded like u were refferin to it so now i feel like a real dick head
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Old 02-20-05, 12:33 AM   #8
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iz kewl duke cuz "supmann" feelin' salty too...I'm a female, lol...
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LV - real talk as usual..dope shit
you're like the best story teller over a beat

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my whole album is inspired by you LV.
thats how i got this classic album.
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Old 02-20-05, 12:59 AM   #9
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i never said anything in reference in u being a man, i say man or mayn to females too lol dont take it too personal lol by the way, since i rate ur shit rate mine
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Old 02-20-05, 12:30 PM   #10
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cool tongue rapist, u have any pics???????
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Old 02-20-05, 12:37 PM   #11
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lol horny lil fucks .... nice joint ma .. still doin ya thing .. nice flow right hurr .. i'll be droppin some of my shit soon once i see wut these dudes is all about
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Old 02-20-05, 12:39 PM   #12
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hey man i'm not horny im just curious to see who put out this open mic
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Old 02-20-05, 10:54 PM   #13
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the sikkest text head that doesn't do text any more, LMAO...
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LV - real talk as usual..dope shit
you're like the best story teller over a beat

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my whole album is inspired by you LV.
thats how i got this classic album.
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Old 02-20-05, 11:46 PM   #14
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aight lets see what u look like and if u pass maybe we can hook up
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Old 02-22-05, 10:34 AM   #15
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Rape with your Tongue.............

Naw, not really, Rape scares me yo!

Just uppin this peice for you, an being random
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