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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-31-05 at 01:09 AM

Must drop verse in 1600 minutes after check in.

Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-29-05 10:30 PM.

you challenging me, now there's a crisis to behold
i'll take you to school, no doubt, just as king mitas made gold
just some wannabe punk looking for some success to aquire
but you'd have more luck trying to turn water to fire
and whats with the name, you in some kind of struggle
or maybe its because you got no balls to juggle
whatever it is, your not up to my level
i suggest looking somewhere else, maybe make a deal with the devil
'cause you got nothing to work with, your whack, a joke
you better check your chest, because i smell gun smoke

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there, not quite midnight, my clock is messed, but go nuts, peace

i haven't bin on dis site in a minute
so i dont know how ya'll do things
i'll post my monday midnite

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I'm da Fuckin Wordsmith

kesse u go first. imma go after u.
good luck

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I'm da Fuckin Wordsmith

aight man, but just to let you know, gotta be by tonight midnight (sunday), or 1:00 monday, i guess, just dont miss it

i already did go man, you gotta click "accept" and then post your verse

Crisis has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 02:06 PM.

Kesse lyrics is messe cuz he takes da pill wit da E
Rappin aint for feeble minds, my verse is lyrical light he will soon see
when i'm done wit dis nigga, u'll see him on Bio, tellin his story
He's a queer from under his boyfriends dick, not purgatory
I'm verbally sharper den glass wit slick words, call me fast
i'll leave K not O K, with other dead bodies like a tsunami passed
Equiped like Scarface, i'll call da ambulance ahead, then enter ya door
but it wont matter cuz ur soul will be out fore ya body hits da floor.
i had dis battle from da beginning da logical choice would have bin to forfeit
its like buying a hamster and naming it Virginity, when u know u already lost it

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I'm da Fuckin Wordsmith

Voted For: Crisis

o shit yo dis was one-sided yo....
neva underestimate a newbie people

punches- lol.....crisis had the punches flowin although they weren't that great!

personals- Kesse had personals...god way to adress his name Kesse

multis- none of yall.....work on dat shit

closing- crisis had the closer, Kesse ur closer seemed like a filler, work on dat homie fo real....

vote/crisis.......good job but elevate

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haha, alright bud, whatever, thanks for feeed, but i be a newb too, lookin for more UPPPPPPIN

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