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Old 03-15-05, 10:25 PM   #1
Ice Pick
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Textual Intercourse Telepathy

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Textual Intercourse Telepathy
Far more than Sex-To-Me…
Verbally breaking down physical Complexities-Algebraically...
Till we simultaneously sexually reach a state of full climax successfully...
Poetry in Motion to the fullest kinetically…
It’s real


: Ma, just try to understand that mentally on a higher basis we can communicate and connect…Before sex you must first arouse my intellect, theoretically we’re to engage in Mind Sex before physical sex… either way… its guaranteed I shall satisfy your every emotion… Now… Lay back… Focus…Open your mind… and relax… Me and Rell are gunna take full control…


V1: :Ice Pick
I
Put your Faith-In-Me
Emotionally, Mentally and Physically Facing-Me
Gracefully I shall take you to fulfillment as long as you stay-with-me ~ faithfully…
Safe-n-free ~ Within my arms is the place-to-be ~ safe-fully
Is it now safe-to-see ~
How deep you love runs for me ~ within your heart is there a place-for-me?
Giving you my all mind, body-n-soul until you decipher the base-of-me
Kissing, holding, squeezing and Tasting-me…Submerge unto me, Play-with-me
I
Each n Every Eternal Everlasting Emmense Emotion Entirely Exposed n Expressed NonBlatantly
Got me anxiously ~ waitin in anticipation Patiently
I
{Are you feeling me? Relax, cause I’m not going to attempt to take you to far}

I
Bodies collide as we lie side by side and communicate feeling intensive mental Vibes-And-Connections
Beautiful Eyes-And-Complexion,
I just long to hold you close cause I know within your arms Lie-Direction
Just let me stimulate your Mind-To-Perfection as your Thighs-I’m-Caressing
I
{ This love we share defies- Perfection…Realize- affection breaking away from the art of obsession}
I
No lies- pure confessing
Your sexual potency provoking-me
Illusive confrontations, this situation got me waitin for what you showing-me
Pure devotion for me
The in explainable explained thru poetry ~ time proceeds to elapse as we manifest emotionally
My heart exposed openly ~ Love is forever deep knowingly

Nasty Rell: Take it lower-B

:Ice Pick
I
Physicality my Mentality erect ~
Deeper levels of sex we perfect and we connect only if you let my intellect affect your emotions correct ~
I shall never defect as you proceed to get wet as feelings accumulate-and-collect
We communicate-and-connect ~ Better yet let me express my emotions direct thru text ~
I
… Fluidly… ~ Only if in my mind you choose-to-be
Physical and Mental satisfaction is new-to-see
Truthfully ~ love forever true-indeed
Baby girl you-and-me

Chorus://Nasty Rell aka the Overseer:
I
Girl you-and-me, we approach the boundary prudently
And strip each other down to psychological nudity
It's new-to-me, not knowing what love is construed-to-be
But it'd be rude to leave… before I choose-a-seed...

Lady Love Consuming-me, invade physical space till there is no room-to-breathe
Speechless- emotionally complete-ness is so soon-to-be
Soon-to-see, finding out what love is construed-to-be
But it’d be rude to leave… before I choose-a-seed…


I
My love I feel it in the back-of-my-mind
Unravel thoughts trap-n-confined
As I hold-ya-close
Till the point were we proceed to overdose
Thoughts elope ~ Words wrote ~ poetical quotes
Finding out what its construed to be as me tongue kiss and embrace faces
Elevating Levels to higher basis as I comfort you and ya painful past erases
Places like Mind and soul is what my love is flowing-though…
Take it slow-with-you…
I just wanna feel what you going-through…
Physical Desire is real…
But sex could never reach the fullest extent without me knowing-you
Showing-you…
I
Unthought of dimensions of sex engulfed and grasped and brought into comprehension
Mind sex pure Intentions mental positions
Sexual tension vibes got me interested- vice versa agreeable ~

Nasty Rell: Break it down for her to a clearer-view

Ice Pick: Afterwards ever shall I leave you abandoned you… Remain close and here-with-you
Just put your faith-in-me faithfully I know you scared cause the future is unforeseeable ~

Chorus:// Nasty Rell aka the Overseer:
I
Baby Girl you-and-me, we approach the boundary prudently
And strip each other down to psychological nudity
It’s new-to-me, not knowing what love is construed-to-be
But it’d be rude to leave… before I choose a seed...

Ice Pick;
I
Lady Love Consuming-me, invade physical space till there is no room-to-breathe
Speechless- emotionally complete-ness is so soon-to-be
Soon-to-see, finding out what love is construed-to-be
But it’d be rude to leave… before I choose-a-seed…
I
Ice Pick: Say love…This love I feel is real… if only you could see that… I know you scared inside because the future is unclear… but just hold my hand and have faith in me… Forever I shall be by your side… and I shall take you to were passion lies… Mentally…

Textual Intercourse Telepathy

Mind Sex

Craziest shit i've read in a minute...Featured for iunno,2 weeks~FLUID.
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Last edited by fluidmoon : 03-28-05 at 08:45 PM.
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Old 03-16-05, 12:14 AM   #2
Terumoto
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It was dope. I wont go into detail about the dopeness though.

Heres what you can improve:
You start new lines at the wrong time... thats basically whats fuckin up ya structure. Might just be ya style or somethin though.

whats the link to ya audio?
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Old 03-16-05, 04:01 AM   #3
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Dope shit.. Multies like whoa up in this one..

Structure aint really all that, but the vocab is real nice.. Imagry was pretty good too. I'm feelin it man.
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Old 03-19-05, 06:37 PM   #4
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This was fucking dope, crazy wordplay and vocabulary, great job...glad to see you post again.1
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