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Old 02-16-05, 08:17 PM   #1
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SensoR and 20 GraND...No Nonsense... DOPEST TRACK!!

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Old 02-16-05, 08:50 PM   #2
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yea dat track is fire the beat & all but when u 1st come in 20 u kinda fade out a lil bit but eventually come bacc 2 where people can hear ya on da track but overall quality was perfect also return the favor in my battles ight 1 luv 1 thug
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Old 02-16-05, 09:00 PM   #3
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jea the fade is because the beat switches up and i faded out on purpose, its like an "intro" to my verse kinda
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Old 02-16-05, 09:01 PM   #4
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Aiight, nice shit here.


Flow-nice both heads
Lyrics- nice both heads
Beat- dope
Multi'z- nice
Staying on the beat- good


Yo this track is dope, can't say no more.

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Old 02-17-05, 09:01 PM   #5
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tru tru good looks on the feed back yall its appreciated .. stay up Ez 1ne
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Old 02-17-05, 09:26 PM   #6
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yo sensor ima re-record my parts, im getting a pop filter tommorow, so ill record tommorow holla
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Old 02-17-05, 09:39 PM   #7
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this was a nice track.

Senser, holy shit. shit was fire. Damn, yo multies all over the place. Feelin' that flow. Beat ill too. Damn nothing more to say. hook ill too.

20, nice shit too. I didn't like that fading thing in beginnin' but other than that nice. Quality could be better, few pops here and there, should be better wit yo pop filter. outro got kinda fucked up wit you and him talkin' at same time. But yo flow was pretty nice, yo. Got a nice voice.

but overall, nice track.. 8.5/10

20, since I peeped yo track, I would appreciate it, and so would senser lol, if you could peep my and SenseR's track "Put yo hands up" pc.
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Old 02-17-05, 11:46 PM   #8
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really different like whoah been awhile sense ive seen 20 do somin but yo 20 youve been practicin i can see the flow has improved the the tone of your voice is alot better the creativty you had was great like damn you came out good

whoa senser another dope chorus from you damn i liked the combination you and 20 have on this track pretty tight ass collab real feeling this shit i download it to be cool for ya guys ight

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Old 02-18-05, 01:46 PM   #9
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Whoa...this track is fuckin fire...flow is nice from both heads...hook is nice, nice shit...very nice track, lyrics is good, quality is fuckin sweet, very dope track, keep it up.
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Old 02-18-05, 06:26 PM   #10
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aight first dude is spittin...flow is on point...lyrics is good...nice rhyme scheme good delivery yamean...

2nd- dude flow is good...not as good as the first cat tho...lyrics are coo...delivery was aight...vocals kinda low...

chorus is coo

overall good track right here. peace


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Old 02-18-05, 06:34 PM   #11
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yea this hook is str8 nahmean beat is aight ...aight first cat good emotion delivery is pretty good...umm lyrics are good damn flow is good scheme was tough


the 2nd cat nahmean delivery is aight flow was good like my homie sed above just not as good as the first cats lyrics werent there either...but yea overall solid joint nahmean props on your work decent drop
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Old 02-19-05, 11:23 AM   #12
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Old 02-19-05, 11:24 AM   #13
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damnnnnnn. no joke right here, chorus is ill nonstop flow. and sensor your flow on your verse is untoppable. nycest shit i heard from u by far. on point no doubt. 20 g's. fade out thing not feelin but i know u always come with flame so it dont matter. dejavous line wasw tite, your flow is fast on this too. def a hot one, sensor shined on this the most but 20 was still fire. good work yall. keep droppin that hotness.ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Old 02-23-05, 04:42 PM   #14
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Ight uppn dis, i re-did my verse, doper quality and shii, feel me on dis one
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