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Her Memories. Her One LOve
IP: CF4E 8780
as she stares out her window. look'n afar , she holds a baby in her arms , only seven. days old. he looks to her for nurture and care. she can't help but cry. because inside.she knows . this will be the last day. she is going to be able to hold him she musters up everything she has she knows if she keeps him . he simply won't last the inner conflict as she stands outside of the orphanage to give him up. or to destroy him looking down she whispers his name. she knows by doing this . she will be the reason he breathes the softness of his skin. the curls in his hair. his brown eyes, the clothing he wears. forever placed in her memory it was hard for her to see,with the tears in her eyes she loved her son so much,she couldn't say good bye and as her grasp loosened she could hardly speak. .. .. .. .. her love . her heart. she couldn't part its something she couldn't take she can't do it again. how can she go on this way? *not all poetry has to rhyme.. and u don't need the biggest words...well at least not all the time.
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very nice dawg
would have been betta if rhymed but its still aight |
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IP: CF4E 8780
yea i think i might make a rhyme out of it but thanks for the feed back
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IP: B90D 8278
Not bad. The message was of no use cuz it was a dope drop. Nice structure and wording.
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