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Old 03-24-05, 11:34 PM   #1
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Old 03-25-05, 11:35 AM   #2
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final has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-25-05 11:35 AM.
 
Old 03-25-05, 03:33 PM   #3
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Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-25-05 03:33 PM.
 
Old 03-26-05, 03:09 PM   #4
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wickeds mediocre at best...thats why luda is his hero
his initials even say hes wack, it says he Wins Zero"(W and O...win, zero)
his sig states..."Get It Straight"...but i think you should instead
cuz his girl says that to him...when hes fuckin in her bed (cant get an erection/cant find the right hole)
nah thats absurd...wicked with a girl?...they give him the cold shoulder
cuz he rolls on her...moans and hurls...then rolls back over
says hes a "..Bondafide Hustler..", another gunit groupie thats insane
atleast i know what you guys have in common...you all rap the same
wickeds a beginner in any game, without strings he'll quickly fall
cuz even he admitted himself...that hes not a vet at all...
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Old 03-26-05, 11:19 PM   #5
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My heat smokin this nigga with time trials and tribulations...
Arrestin Finals emulations with my electricly impulsive defibulation...
Ur minds childs play to manipulate with your lame mentality...
If this was mortal combat it'd be a fatality...
I ate a "tic-tac backwords" so I’d come at you with fresh tactics...
Lets be realistic you ain't artistic, you're simplistic...
You and me can face-off, until I leave you faceless...
With abrasive phrases to give your face, a face-lift...
Iam done with this bitch and thats my "Final" answer...
Tisss, you winning ha thats like people trying to fight cancer...
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Old 03-27-05, 12:19 AM   #6
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^gay...you had to change your avy and sig...wack sportsmanship...wateva

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Old 03-27-05, 12:24 AM   #7
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whoa my bad.....didnt know seriously....someone just made me a Sig.....my bad....
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Old 03-28-05, 02:43 PM   #8
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uppin............................................. .
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Old 03-28-05, 10:55 PM   #9
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wickeds mediocre at best...thats why luda is his hero
his initials even say hes wack, it says he Wins Zero"(W and O...win, zero)
nice personal, creative!!
his sig states..."Get It Straight"...but i think you should instead
cuz his girl says that to him...when hes fuckin in her bed (cant get an erection/cant find the right hole)
ok, cud have been done better!!
nah thats absurd...wicked with a girl?...they give him the cold shoulder
cuz he rolls on her...moans and hurls...then rolls back over
funny!
says hes a "..Bondafide Hustler..", another gunit groupie thats insane
atleast i know what you guys have in common...you all rap the same
decent again!!
wickeds a beginner in any game, without strings he'll quickly fall
cuz even he admitted himself...that hes not a vet at all...
hot closer, nice personal!!


My heat smokin this nigga with time trials and tribulations...
Arrestin Finals emulations with my electricly impulsive defibulation...
ok opener, nice vocab!!
Ur minds childs play to manipulate with your lame mentality...
If this was mortal combat it'd be a fatality...
structure off, 2nd line played!!
I ate a "tic-tac backwords" so I’d come at you with fresh tactics...
Lets be realistic you ain't artistic, you're simplistic...
1st line was clever, 2nd line fucked it up!!
You and me can face-off, until I leave you faceless...
With abrasive phrases to give your face, a face-lift...
ok!
Iam done with this bitch and thats my "Final" answer...
Tisss, you winning ha thats like people trying to fight cancer...
nah! not feelin the closer!

final took this battle cuz he was more consistent with the punches. he was more creative and his punches were hittin harder. wicked one i think u need to elevate on ure punches cuz they were weak yo, no hate but u were not hurtin final, try to be more creative and shit. only plus u had was the vocab, it was gud, but u need some more elevation yo.

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Old 03-28-05, 11:40 PM   #10
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Voted For: final

word, ima go with final on this one

wicked, i thought the punches you threw were a little weak compared to some shit i've seen you throw...uh, and finals were a little more thought out and hit harder....i also thought you kinda over vocabed the first part of you're verse, it was kinda cool, but i dont think it was that effective, and you dind't really do it anymore in the rest of your verse......well, flow and structure were good......need to get more creative i think, and up the complexity a little more......not a bad drop, but final came harder

final, thought you had some funny shit in here, structure you really need to work on, its all over the place, haha, but it flowed aight, had some hard punches in there, nice personals.....you stayed consistent with dissin him, and you came pretty hard, 3rd bar was pretty whack thou, but the rest of your verse was pretty effective.......good play on his name, and nice finisher, good stuff man

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Old 03-29-05, 09:26 PM   #11
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Voted For: final

wicked one~nice vocabulary in your verse, some good punchlines, but i saw no real personals here, yet you did have creative lines, your verse was strong throughout,but for the closer,i expected something stronger,and more hard hitting..you said"you winning,is like people trying to fight cancer", which if you think about it, doesnt seem very hard hitting...just being honest here, other then that,i thought, you had great vocabulary and creativity in your verse..1
final~nice openerthought it wasa pretty decent personal, nice wordplay in the next bar..lol@ the gunit bar,and "you all rap the same" punch, effective,hard hitting punch, your closing bar added more to this battle verse, overall strong verse here, again,creative punches, because of stronger disses in his verse,i have to give this to final..but good job overall fellas.1
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Old 03-29-05, 11:17 PM   #12
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Voted For: final

My heat smokin this nigga with time trials and tribulations...
Arrestin Finals emulations with my electricly impulsive defibulation...
decent
Ur minds childs play to manipulate with your lame mentality...
If this was mortal combat it'd be a fatality...
nope
I ate a "tic-tac backwords" so I’d come at you with fresh tactics...
Lets be realistic you ain't artistic, you're simplistic...
?...weak punch
You and me can face-off, until I leave you faceless...
With abrasive phrases to give your face, a face-lift...
decent
Iam done with this bitch and thats my "Final" answer...
Tisss, you winning ha thats like people trying to fight cancer...
stupid…


wickeds mediocre at best...thats why luda is his hero
his initials even say hes wack, it says he Wins Zero"(W and O...win, zero)
good persona punch
his sig states..."Get It Straight"...but i think you should instead
cuz his girl says that to him...when hes fuckin in her bed
nah
nah thats absurd...wicked with a girl?...they give him the cold shoulder
cuz he rolls on her...moans and hurls...then rolls back over
no…weak here
says hes a "..Bondafide Hustler..", another gunit groupie thats insane
atleast i know what you guys have in common...you all rap the same
pretty decent
wickeds a beginner in any game, without strings he'll quickly fall
cuz even he admitted himself...that hes not a vet at all...
decent

overall final took this one, punches were harder & better, both structures
were good, but final took this one though…

RTF final…

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Old 03-30-05, 12:23 AM   #13
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Wicked One:

My heat smokin this nigga with time trials and tribulations...
Arrestin Finals emulations with my electricly impulsive defibulation...
^^self glorif. No punch 1/10
Ur minds childs play to manipulate with your lame mentality...
If this was mortal combat it'd be a fatality...
^^wack 2/10
I ate a "tic-tac backwords" so I’d come at you with fresh tactics...
Lets be realistic you ain't artistic, you're simplistic...
^^doesnt even rhyme 1/10
You and me can face-off, until I leave you faceless...
With abrasive phrases to give your face, a face-lift...
^^finally something decent 4/10
Iam done with this bitch and thats my "Final" answer...
Tisss, you winning ha thats like people trying to fight cancer...
^^good closer 6/10

Overall: 14/50 (28%)

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wickeds mediocre at best...thats why luda is his hero
his initials even say hes wack, it says he Wins Zero"
^^good nameplay 6/10
his sig states..."Get It Straight"...but i think you should instead
cuz his girl says that to him...when hes fuckin in her bed
^^decent 4/10
nah thats absurd...wicked with a girl?...they give him the cold shoulder
cuz he rolls on her...moans and hurls...then rolls back over
^^lmfao 9/10
says hes a "..Bondafide Hustler..", another gunit groupie thats insane
atleast i know what you guys have in common...you all rap the same
^^wack 3/10
wickeds a beginner in any game, without strings he'll quickly fall
cuz even he admitted himself...that hes not a vet at all...
^^decent 5/10

overall: 27/50 (54%)

Vote: Final

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