i was asked to post this for him
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/20grand.htm

holla back

replied to tha Q and omen

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

aight beat is aight...
1st...flow was pretty good..delivery needs work...kinda boring delivery...lyrics were good...had a few good lines...dont sound to comfortable on the mic...mic presence needs a lil work...

chorus not really feel to much

2nd dude flow was coo...flow was aight...breathe control problem...clarity in certain parts were kinda ify...delivery was aight...lyrics were pretty good..

overall this was a coo track fellas. 1


return the fav
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177734

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first cat, very free flowish, smooth, not forced at all... The style doesn't sound 100% complete, but its a good base for elevation, lyrics were solid- hook was cool, second verse sounds like the first cat again, same good points, the cat that starts flowin after that (same guy on the hook)... sounds o.k, but not as entertaining as the first cat... your voice is much more monotone and lower volume, a little harder to grasp everything you say, but lyrically your moving in good directions, just make your sound a little more palletable to the listener, maybe more influation would help... i liked the flow more towards the end of the verse... good shit all in all, keep droppin, peep my new shit its up towards the top now. 1

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uppin for more feedback, i'm Debit or as ya'll would know me on here as Banks, Myth, Identikal, Cenario, whatever else u know me as, i did the first verse, the verse with something bout mr.potato head and i did the first half of the second verse with the r.kelly line, this track was my first official track, it's going on a ny mixtape, the guy doing the hook is the dj who is putting the mixtape out, be on the lookout for "Make It Through", it'll be posted on here soon, uppin for more feedback

hmmm i liked the track....
i think you showed me it awhile back debit? sounded familiar...
everything was goin good for the most part on this track, nuttin i didnt really like too much...
the hook i jus wasnt feelin for some reason thouhg? jus a lil bit though, its nuttin important really....
overall nice job wit dis..i enjoyed it...

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Soundclick's being a bitch...but i'll edit this later..1
EDIT::intro is a little muffled...nice beat
1stCAT~not bad, good voice and flow, but you could use some mixing help/and or production help, to clean shit up, good lyrics..
HOOK~not bad, kinda catchy...
2ndCAT~again, not bad flow wise, just need some mixing help, pretty good overall, keep droppin fellas..1

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