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Old 02-26-05, 04:17 AM   #1
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dope new track ....IMperfections..

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OK FIRST OF ALL THIS IS NOT A SONG MADE BY ME... THIS GUY I KNOW MADE THIS SONG AND WANTED TO NO IF YOU ALL CAN GIVE FEEDBACK...

OK this is not a hip hop or Rap song its more of a..well i dont know........ts different...just give him a chance......and you might not liek the type of music but just pretend you did ......do you think his song can make it mainstream ...

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Old 02-26-05, 08:23 AM   #2
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nyce guitar at the beginning, feelin' dat a lot...if that's him playing he got madd talent yo...he got a kewl voice, just needs to smooth it out, it's really raw right now...if he layered the other tracks in Cool Edit with him singing it in harmony it'd be even better but it's tyte for an acoustic performance...this will be good once he puts some electric guitar, bass and drums on it...lyrics are nyce too, definetly feelin' 'em...like the bridge how he changed it up laTer on in the song, I can see an Orchestra in that part of the song...

so basically, HELL YEAH, this dude would be HOTT in the main stream, lol...I love rock and ish like this, I listen to it on the radio all the time so this is from someone that actually listens to this type of music and plays both guitar and drums not just raps...get this kat in the studio where his vocals can be smoothed out and the mic can handle it when he gets loud and he'll be on yo...most certainly has a lot of talent...
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Old 02-26-05, 11:35 AM   #3
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decent guitar playing...my father is a guitar player, he could probably say if it's good or not...sounds decent at least


but um...where is the rappin

RAP verse .com..not ROCK verse dot com


decent for what it was


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Old 02-27-05, 02:43 AM   #4
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like i told you....there is no Rap.......i understand this is Rapverse . com but i wanted some feedbacl on this shit so .....uuuppppppiiinnnn
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Old 02-27-05, 05:27 PM   #5
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lmao @ "pretend you liked it", i love guitar, i have an acoustic, and i can play a little bit, i like using that as a backdrop to new shit i write, anyhoo, i loved it, i cant get enough from the guitar....hes got a good voice as well, dope shit, its always refrshing to hear new shit..1
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Old 02-28-05, 01:53 PM   #6
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werd he's much much much much much much much much better than you FLUID, I mean shit, he actually holds a tune ...
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