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Old 07-27-02, 12:17 PM   #1
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a conversation w/ self

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why do you love him so...yet you cant stay with him?

why does the fact that you cant have him bring tears to your eyes if you dont still want to be with him?...

on the other hand y does you face light up when you hear that new name?

... areyou shielding yourself or have you started a new flame? one that burns by itself and doesnt need tending?

one that will amount to more then a burned ot heap of
sticks this one will start a forest fire... the flame has started to spread

first in through your eyes then your mind eating slowly away at your brain....but you dont feel the pain of this burn you embrace it...

ur soul is the only one being hurt ripping away from ur once tru love only to be shut out by
another.....

but the flame still glows inside your mind and in ur heart... whichflame is it.. u dont know where to start
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Old 07-27-02, 12:33 PM   #2
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very deep lov the way it come together, good imagination and expression too i like it
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Old 07-27-02, 12:59 PM   #3
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i knows what this is about... and im sorry u are all confused leah... its a good peice, i loved the way that u used ur words... the flow was shaky every once in a while, but besides that, i felt wat u were sayin... and leah, u know if u need to talk to some one, u can talk to me... ill listen... u know that though...keep it flowin
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Old 07-27-02, 02:40 PM   #4
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shyt was serious. keep elevating .1luv
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Old 07-27-02, 03:20 PM   #5
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hey thanx for the replys... ummm i guess it was a little shakey in places thanx sarah 4 pointin that out ... but i was really goin thro this in my head... so i wasnt expectin to post it...... but thanx everyone for reading it~much luv~peace
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Old 07-28-02, 07:51 AM   #6
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dang gurl .. i can relate to dis,
its a painful time ... and u have to be strong!

Head up gurl

Much Love
~1~
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