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03-01-05, 09:37 PM
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These Random Writings
IP: CF4E 8780
the last night we had. it was our last night we had together i brought out the melody. i borrowed it from the wind the stains of your last words curse these barren walls don't forget about. please don't forget about november you cried in front of me. as your walls fell to the ground i knelt down beside you. and wiped away your tears the brink of loss.was where you stood the curse of your happiness. as your tears fell . i could only see you mumble solem words "save me now ... i held you and promised" and i promised to simply never let go hey hey we can hold on to the tide we can wait forever as long as i ... as long as i never forget your last verse. you opened up to me that night just in time...you brought me back.just to let me go? it wasnt planned . it wasnt part of the dress code ..... and we standing here gathering age.... and losing the long breath . waiting for the first mistake with my back against the wall. i hail you tonight because tomorrow morning we'll despise ourselves. but let this love live for as long as we can speak.
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03-02-05, 05:19 PM
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again, dope job lately man, you been proving how well you free write, keep up the good work..1
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03-02-05, 09:05 PM
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
Well, I Kind Of like This Piece The only Thing That Wasn't To Good About It Is The Vocabulary But Everything Else Was Dope Man
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