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im so tiered of bein pssed off i dont care if i make you mad im
kickin myself in tha ass for not beatin tha fuck out of my dad if i ever come across tha mothafucka agian he better be prepared ta swing back......if he ever wants ta see tha light of day i hope he can run fast..... cocksucker ran out on us cuz he couldnt raze his own 2 kids he left my mother ta deal with his deut i cant wait ta meet him agian my so called life has been nothin but regret an sin cuz of him i wanted ta charish moments in my life but thanks to him i cant couldnt see it comin look it were im at.....told me (id amount ta nothin your another piece of crap just like your mother then he'ed laught ![]() grabed tha 22 of tha shelf thinkin i could solve slavery but i knew it ed involve doin time ,majorly rottin a 5 by 7 cell not a prison or a jail id be dieing of my own will............................CB83 I WAS BORDE ![]() my worlds been corupted tha goverment can shuv it theres no hideing behind tha truth an theres nothin me or you can say or ever do.....
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Great display of emotion I appreciate people who can encorporate that kind of fury in their open mics. Work on your multi schemes and structure... keep writin' yo... Return tha favor on my open mic "You Don't Know Me"
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yo this was better than usual,your elevating man,now heres what you need to do:
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx sentenses like that...and then its gonna be more good and fun to read,only advice,good drop man |
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Pretty good verse homie good wordplay and good flow but u need to work on ur structure u showed some heart and emotion in dis peace........8/10 Pz RTF link in sig
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Appreciate Tha Feed Bac Ill Be Sure Ta Do Tha Same
Tha Poetic Side Is From My Heart /my Rap Is Another Side To Me Thats I Was Givein From Tha Start............cb83
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