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03-01-05, 11:54 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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Together (Mom, Dad & I)- Single
IP: 5043 32F4
Chorus- Mom all you need to do is stop hating on my Father Even tho im just like him, theres no need to Bother.. I wish this fighting had never began in the first Place Now atleast it stopped & now its no longer a Disgrace.. Mom & Dad............ Back in the day when I was around ten years Old My parents started hating each other, on every Road The yelling in the kitchen in the middle of the Night Really got me annoyed, almost got me saying Fight I was so young I thought they were blaming shit on Me The reactions my brothers & I got, was like a Penalty Now I’m 14, dads telling me its almost my moms Fault The words said from my dads mouth, made me Halt Only reason I can give to why it started, there is None All that fun, gone, sometimes I feel like taking a Run Everything is all in the Past, nothin left for the Future I could a tried helping keep it together, nah ima Failure Trying to help out, I probably would have got in the Way Then end up later in life, realizing how im so Faraway Good thing my life wasn’t more worse then it usto Be Living with my dad is better, and now I feel like im Free My mom just aint getting it, she needs to open her Eyes She needs to stop, then I can see my futures Surprise.. Chorus- Mom all you need to do is stop hating on my Father Even tho im just like him, theres no need to Bother.. I wish this fighting had never began in the first Place Now atleast it stopped & now its no longer a Disgrace.. |
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03-01-05, 11:56 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1995531
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1995536 Last edited by Parallel : 03-01-05 at 11:59 PM. |
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03-02-05, 12:00 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
alright upping..........
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03-02-05, 12:05 AM
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a.k.a prozak
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IP: B845 C898
yo some tight shit i felt ya homie really i did u had some shit i could actually relate too now that the o.m is fillin up with all disses i'll give ya a 7.5/10
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03-04-05, 03:58 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
thanks but i dont like people rating me its all bull shit to me, so just give me feed and ill be happy for seeing people seeing that i actually did something on a story instead of just write random bars and lines to rhyme
peace, uppin |
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03-04-05, 04:03 PM
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unknown legend...
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IP: 0F40 8178
im not going to say this was tite or anything like that....it just had a purpose...and all i can say is that if it makes u happy then good job...to me it means nothing...(i hope that doesn't offend you)...btw return favour as always..~one~
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03-04-05, 04:06 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
778/1000...haha j/m.....not bad man....the second bar of the chorus, thought flow was a little off...but the main verse, not bad, some lines were a little unflowing, but i liked it....had some good emotion in there, last part was probs the best, or the first 2 bars,...yeah, i cant decide, but nice piece 8/10.......hahahah, j/m, just up vocab a little, yeah, thats my feed
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this world is a drug, and everyone's selfish FLY FREE |
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03-04-05, 05:11 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
yo thanks uppin
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