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Old 03-06-05, 10:23 PM   #1
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"Encore" Last open mic for a while

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Last open mic for a while... perfect time to say goodbye...

can i get an encore? do you want more?
we's gettin raw with the maryland boy,
so for one last time i need ya'll to roar,
now what the hell are you waiting for?
After me there will be no more, so for,
one last time nigga make some noise...

i been slept on, stepped on but my rep wasn't questioned,
couple years old and my peers told me to expect unexpected,
recelect some impressions, that had been reflecting actors,
imagine me... shit... oops. actually that refelctions backwards,
my RV career started to appear and i was testin cowards,
the last open mic for a while is when my affection showers,
lyrical content is not sick but somethin i've been investin hours,
almost givin this up for a girl is somethin im less than proud of,
economy was destroyed when them boys wrecked the tours,
our generation have had several patients and im the best of ours,
been writin text for hours, notice these impressive powers,
the rest is sour after you mention how their account is less than ours,
bastards curious, while listening to the most nasty lyricist,
how clear is this? its nothing like a childhood past experience,
this is the last for now, nasty how they half to stare at it,
im unique... and my style... no way you could actually mirror it..

can i get an encore? do you want more?
we's gettin raw with the maryland boy,
so for one last time i need ya'll to roar,
now what the hell are you waiting for?
After me there will be no more, so for,
one last time nigga make some noise...

alright alright... it was 16 years ago when i was made then named,
first of all i changed the way i live, then i changed the game,
no worries, the flow buries and shows fury that will shortly spark,
born racy and evil, crazy to people, thats how my story starts,
my glory darts.. explodes and then shows what is more than art,
thats why my ryhme book might look like the place i pour my heart,
so what you waitin for, the part? where i finish the verse,
so you can read it again and again until you remember the words,
sendin some curves from the plate when i assemble my verbs,
and pronouns, cause i throwdown before you assemble a verse,
this is my gift and my curse, scream till ya lungs get sore,
thats how i can know if ya'll will want some more,
jump and roar, all ya'll out blast the loud speakers,
as i throw my chain, yell my name, see ima crowd pleaser,
so fuck with that, i'll leave and still be runnin rap,
capture this cause after this they will be no comin back...

can i get an encore? do you want more?
we's gettin raw with the maryland boy,
so for one last time i need ya'll to roar,
now what the hell are you waiting for?
After me there will be no more, so for,
one last time nigga make some noise...

ya'll can consider this last verse, my victory lap,
cause when im finished, its finished, ain't no gettin me back,
please don't be sendin me crap, about doin collabs,
i appreciate the thought, but thats as true as i am,
all ya'll disapointed, well its somethin im sorry fo',
but check back in a week and i'll dumpin out audios,
thats how the story goes, as of now, im leavin rap,
i ain't teasin man... want an encore? read it back..

can i get an encore? do you want more?
we's gettin raw with the maryland boy,
so for one last time i need ya'll to roar,
now what the hell are you waiting for?
After me there will be no more, so for,
one last time nigga make some noise...

and im out...
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Old 03-06-05, 10:27 PM   #2
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what a way toleave eh? nice structure, flow is cool...i guess you saved the best for last man...8.5/10
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Old 03-06-05, 10:28 PM   #3
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dope as fuck...multies killed tha shit...we'll miss the OM's...
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Old 03-06-05, 10:30 PM   #4
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9.5/10 must i say more u hot kid..................please return the favor in my open mic in my signutare
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Old 03-06-05, 10:42 PM   #5
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yo that was ill feel disapointed that u leavin for real but ya'll be comin out with more some time again so until that day we should have sumthin to look forward for i really felt this shit one of the best open mics i read seriously it has the most effort i've ever seen in an open mic and really emotional shit like a M-8 to the chest yo this some good shit i'm tellin ya...flow was perfect nuthin through it off and multi's kept it goin like mad fuck dude this belongs in the hall of fame i easily give an 10/10 without question...we'll miss ya and whoever talks shit bout ya while your gon' is takin cheap shots like lil bitches and i'll shut 'em up for ya
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Old 03-06-05, 11:09 PM   #6
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meh, it was okay, first verse was choppy, real choppy, thought you kinda forced the multies in there......but you really picked up in the second and final verse, was feeling the flow, and the imagery coming out, so yeah, not a bad piece right here, nice one to go out on
so what you waitin for, the part? where i finish the verse,
so you can read it again and again until you remember the words,
sendin some curves from the plate when i assemble my verbs,
and pronouns, cause i throwdown before you assemble a verse
^best lines right there..word...nice drop
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Old 03-06-05, 11:39 PM   #7
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yeah homie those multies were sick, nice drop all around. good flow, that shit was on point. nice stucture and easy to read. u know onestep always doin his thing.1...
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Old 03-07-05, 01:01 AM   #8
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Old 03-07-05, 03:30 PM   #9
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Old 03-07-05, 04:02 PM   #10
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uppin on my homie OneStepBeyond
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Old 03-07-05, 04:45 PM   #11
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uppin for One Step Beyond on his One Step out lol I'm bored....
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Old 03-07-05, 08:48 PM   #12
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Old 03-08-05, 03:36 PM   #14
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Old 03-08-05, 06:04 PM   #15
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dis jawn was hot...it's self explanitory... 9/10
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