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Old 03-18-05, 08:28 PM   #1
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Epic vs WickedClown

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"Good Day, Gone Bad"

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Old 03-18-05, 09:18 PM   #2
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Epic has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-18-05 09:18 PM.
 
Old 03-18-05, 09:20 PM   #3
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Good Day
As The Sun Rises, Awake, My Eyes Directed Towards My Window,
In The Corner Lies A Cob Web, And Along It A Little Black Widow,
As I Lay In My Bed I Take A Look Around And Into The Room.......
Dust Lights The Floor As The Sun Sweeps Across Like A Broom,
Orange Reflections Off My Window Lights The Room Full Of Gloom,
As I Continue To Tell Myself, I'm Getting Out Of Bed Soon,
Dust Occupies My Feet As I Step Upon The Wooden Floors,
Squeeking With Every Step, As I Walk Toward The Old Door,


Hall Way Is Vacantly Dark, And There Is No Window To Look Out Of
The Clock Strikes, As It Makes A Rythm Like Two Singing Doves,...
A Flight Of Steps To Walk Down, As Cold As The Dark Night,...
But I Know On The Other End Lies A Beautiful Bright Light,....
Sounds Of Wood Cracking Echos Softly Filling The House......
Near The End Lies A Broken Tea Cup, And A Little Brown Mouse,
Sliding Door's Wide Open, So I Step Out Into The Green Grass,
I See My Girl There, "Breakfeast"?, As I Say Naw I'll Pass,.......

I Say To Myself It's A Beautiful Day, While Flowers Start Blooming....
The Sounds And Rythms Of The Birds, And Such Animals Are Soothing
Bad Day
Black Clouds Fill The Skies, With Dangerously Thunder,
Lightning, Strikes The Ground, As The Animals Go Under,
The Smell Is Horribly Disgusting, The Sound Of Rain Hits
It's Puzzling, The Cloud Surround The Sun, Every Piece Fits
As My Girl An I, Run Into The House Before We Get Soaked
Puddles Occurring, Rapidly Fast, To Fast For The Us To Cope


The House Rattles, As We Fall To The Ground, Trembling
I've Had Nightmare Similar But Nothing This Resembling
Mind Is Confused Thinking Is This A Message God Sending
Perfect Storm, Earthquakes,Thunder When To Be Ending?
Dimensions, Across The Windows, As The Glass Gets Slimy
Water's Half A Foot Deep, My Girl Is Scared And Crying

Explosions Volcanic Eruptions Almost 10 Miles Away,
End Of The World?, I Guess Tomorrow, Means Today
A Gentle Kiss Soothing Her Lips, Before It Happens
Then A Tight Hug, Just To See What's Her Reactions
She Says, "Baby Boy, I Love You And Didn't Mean To"
To Me, You Don't Know What You Mean Boo.............


The Sun Comes Out, An I Arise Out Of The Darkness
.......My Heart Grows Back, Leaving Me Un-Heartless
The Wind Calms, My Heart Is Glowing Once Again
The Good Day Has Returned, With A Message Sent
As The Water Dries, The Magma In My Heart Cools
In A Spilt Second Everything Was Fixed With No Tools

The Clouds Break Away, As The Sun Again Arise And
The Pink And Orange, Of Reflections Light The Horizon
The Calm Soothing Comes Back And Everything Is Quiet
After Witnessing In My Heart, Dimensions Of A Riot
I Brace My Lungs As Blood Pump Through My Heart
As A Sudden Rush Calms My Soul And Puzzles Back Apart
A Perfectly Storm In My Heart, A Emotional Illusion
No Longer In Distressed, And No Longer In Confusion
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Old 03-19-05, 07:44 PM   #4
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Hope You Check In Coz, Omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 03-20-05, 02:47 PM   #5
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Old 03-21-05, 12:30 AM   #6
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Wickedclown has DECLINED this battle on 03-21-05 12:30 AM.

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