*same word flow as Gatman & Robin by 50 Cent Feat. Eminem

i'm not fully grown
and i'm already having problems of my own
like my dad needs the docters ta take out a certain bone
but they leave him alone and delay the surgery
as if it wasn't an emergency
even though it's always been an urgency
seems like forever before he gets in the nursery
and u muthafuckas stress me out by beefin wit' me
even though i lay out the perfect shit B
your shit is just shitty
so as one of my confessions i'm gonna do this as one of my professions
so much lyrical tension but not takin' away any of my aggression
i'm simply more deep without question
so many times spent in school suspension right along with the detention
spittin' shit just ta get attention
and i almost forgot ta mention i filled this shit with complextion
i don't deal with muthafuckas i just gat 'em
prayin ta god when i'm on top that my shit hits platinum
and when i fall off i coulda had them
i drop shit that's good enough ta be a national anthym
i'm gettin in this rap shit i just gotta have it
and when i try the contracts i gotta make it
so any records here i'm bound ta break it
right now i'm spittin all truth no gay ass fake shit
i'm not fuckin with you rite now i dont give a fuck bout no faggot

yo i left a quick keystyle just ta release some of the shit thats goin on in my life right now

ight ight some nice shit right here dwag lines were very streched but the flow was tight nice vocab u used that tip i gave u huh nice shit dwag 7.5/10 (would been 9/10 if the ines werent stretched)

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lines were streched as fuck so your flow was wack lyrics sucked i didnt enjoy this.......3/10

yo u cant do any better

and people this song is not choppy if you read it correctly if you know the song Gatman And Robin by 50 Cent Feat. Eminem off of 50's new album "The Massacre" then you'll know the word flow and then if u do, read my keystyle and read it in the same way...they go really fast in a way..not like Twista or anything it's only in a special way which u have ta hear the song to know it....if you dont know how it goes go to www.eminemlounge.com and for the audios of there new songs click Gatman And Robin and it'll play on either your windows media or itunes and then read this