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03-05-05, 11:13 AM
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Odi et Amo
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Behind The Smile - DQ and Da Tongue Rapist
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First part: Da Tongue Rapist
In the blue: Drama Queen The look in your eyes can't be disguised I know you inside and pain's what you hide The tears unseen are what I see, you're not pain free Don't try to hide, don't try to convince me Over and over you say "Nothing's wrong" and smile But I know there's a story I've got to find When the look in your eyes screams for help And I stand back to watch your fading health Why don't you let me be there to comfort you? Can't I just be the friend we've both been used to? Tell me what it is that's made you lose who you are Let me know and we can heal the wounds and smooth the scar . . . . It's my dirty little secret, hidden so deep within I'm afraid to release this oh so sweet but sour sin Only I know the truth so I keep it from you But the pressure is building up, what's left to do? I smile to disguise my bruises and the tears... Disappear when I laugh, no more morbid fears Because I'm happy,can't you read it on my face? But you're still worried although I love this crazy place Despite the weight I carry, innocent being inside me Don't worry 'cause look at me smiling...I'm happy...
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03-05-05, 06:01 PM
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IP:
i was really feeling that... it had alot of honesty in it.. liked the flow and the structure.. both of you did a nice one of this. it had a good message in it .. keep dropping
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03-06-05, 05:20 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP:
^Thanks for feedback, hit us up with a link to return the favor....
DQ
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03-06-05, 12:46 PM
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IP:
damn!! both yall did good! hmmmm good structure, concept, vocab, damn where do i end? lol keep it up.....1
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03-06-05, 12:52 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP:
^Hehe, thanks girl!
DQ
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03-07-05, 01:25 PM
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IP:
nice drop by both of y'all i really was feeling this 1 in particular keep up the good work ladies overall i'll give it 10/10
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