-----just a quick little spit off the top-----

for me pain is life and life is pain// its all equivilant// its been fuckin wierd since that dirty hoe gave me syphilous//
the pussey was all brown and pubes were fallin out// but when i asked her she told me it was cuz she was deciduous// i was only about 14 at the time// and it looked pretty tasty after that fith of bacardi lime// so i ate it fast but that was the worst decision of mah fuckin life// cuz my tounge fell out now i can only speak with my knife// i try to carve words into peeps chest but they always seem to die// last night i went to the docter for a swollen prosdate// he said you only 16 that doesnt happen till you of age// well anywayz, i pulled out my blade so that we could communicate// but doc grabbed a scalpel slashed my eye and stuck it in my leg// when you put it all together im in pretty bad shape// peg leg, no tounge, only one functional eye// and still got a swollen prostate with a dick thats shrivelled and ready to die// if i said oh well, at least i got my health that would be an obvious lie//

you could be the spawn of me and blaster lol tight work twin

thanx cuz.....uppin

do i really have too up this shit again?

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tight shit... its pretty fucked up to have one eye, a peg leg and no toungue, lol

why do you think i dont do audio?
nah j/k
uppin

damn kid spittin fire-but it was sick brah.
nasty imagry.an wway tight drop cuzz keep at it
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yo another hot piece from u man keep it up

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vote on

yo i was lovin this
write some more carzy shit like this fo me nigga

good look on hittin up my "emotions explodin"
ill be lookin fa more of this

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haha dam this was sick..got me imagining all tha crazy shit u spoke..but yo tyte flow..and keep doin ya thang..pz

This was alright for the most part. Pretty wild, but not too much that made me go...DAMN! Solid though. I didn't mean it as a diss. There was one quote that made my jaw drop...

pubes were fallin out// but when i asked her she told me it was cuz she was deciduous
That was goddam funny. Anyone who says otherwise is wrong.

Peace

aYo, that's some crazy topic you got there dunn, but none tha less it was off tha hook

thanx for peepin my shit

uppin this shit for you

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sup dawg,

i'm gonna have to be the only one here who's not feelin your rhyme homie. you had a few lines that i liked, but you need to work on a few things. it probably wouldve sounded a lot better if you found a consistent flow to work with. one

Interestin thoughts goin thru your skull. I thought it was a good flow, but not spectacular. I'm just tryin to get a perspective on everybody's flow in here. Been a while since I posted anywhere.