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03-05-05, 01:56 PM | #1 | |||||
You Cant Handle The Truth
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Fluid Moon Diss
IP: E790 71CF
since she doesn't respond to call-outs, I guess I gotta sling a bit of mud at her face to get her to look my way...here's a quick few bars for her non-singer non-rapper ass...BLAH!...
http://www.rideinconline.com/jamroom/bands/151/ replied to: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...87&page=1&pp=15 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=180206
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Last edited by Da Tongue Rapist : 03-05-05 at 02:26 PM. |
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03-05-05, 02:36 PM | #2 | |||||
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IP: 07A8 D079
ignore 7 he's bitchy right now... this was a solid diss obviously... the beat was hot lol @ the "superwoman shit" ha ha.. ya flow was str8 and you were laid back but your message came through, again solid diss. no flaws from what i'm seeing.. stay up..
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Last edited by ~Lady Fiya~ : 03-05-05 at 02:50 PM. |
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03-05-05, 02:58 PM | #3 | |||||
Engineer / Club Promoter
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IP: 74C8 66CC
Typing as I listen: Your audio levels are WAY too low. that single syl rhymescheme is about 10 years old. The flow was the same on every line - I know Curt ain't teach you that. Lyrics were okay - but typical. Who's dissed Fluid and said something different? they all sound the same right about now, no different fomr IDH's and LF's tracks as far as the punches. All in all, not an impactful diss track. Something liek this would roll off of a real battler's back with ease.
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03-05-05, 03:32 PM | #4 | |||||
Engineer / Club Promoter
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IP: 74C8 66CC
You should have changed your flow so your track didn't sound boring and redundandt. You're not just saying something, you're also entertaining and by using the same flow on all the lines, as you go on you'll defeat half your purpose when you rap. Not jsut that, but varying flow (and rhymescheme) flexes your lyrical muscle. For dudes who don't just rap as some shit on the net, they'll have a greater appreciation of your work. PRovided you give a shit about entertaining, etc.
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I Turn Rappers into Legends Welcome to the Business world. www.soundclick.com/apexx ^Make no mistake about it, the boy is a fuckin BEAST^ The Rush Ent. |
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03-05-05, 04:09 PM | #5 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 0825 899A
im feelin that beat whats that sample from and who did it????????????????................................ ............delivery is ok, not the greatest but your on point. oh its the back to future sample or some shit right?...........your punches arent that great..........niether are your disses, it's not bad but far from great.......it needs some more work to me, just my two cents though, i like that sample that, and it wasn't really your voice throwing it off, more of that you didn't say any lines that would make somebody say "damn" or "rewind that" it was kind of boring. not tryin to hate cause you rode the beat good, and I liked the beat
hit me back if you can http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179850 |
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03-09-05, 09:00 AM | #6 | |||||
You Cant Handle The Truth
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IP: 950F 0FDD
UPin' this for s'more replies...
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03-09-05, 10:09 AM | #7 | ||||
E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: ECB3 36A0
Damn
you killin it..................... flow is dope, disses were nice, an you got a GANGSTA feel ta your lyrics an your vocals, shit was bangin shorty, i'm from the south an i'ma tell you they dont come much gangsta than this little chick right here, propps n dope stuff Keep em comin peace
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