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Old 03-04-05, 11:33 PM   #1
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The ComeBack-- Fuck Lady Fiya...

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http://rapworld.info/forum/printvie...t=13177&start=0

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...highlight=Seven

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...088&postcount=4

3 links of fiya sayin how Nice Seventhird is on a mic... u dumb bitch.


Yeah... written recorded and posted within 2 hours, not 2 weeks like some dumb bitches...

www.soundclick.com/seventhird

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I replied to Pop Lottty's thats me, and Akademiks I remember for anyone lookin for links.
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Old 03-05-05, 12:31 AM   #2
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Typing as I listen: Your flow gets lumpy which is a damn shame. Need some inflection cuz the deliv is straight 2-dimnsional. The punches...lol wow man. Now THAT'S what the fuck I wanna hear - Personals EVERY line. God damn. Well, at least I know there's one other battler here. The bald-spot line LOL. The finisher was hillarious, lol. I'm gonna stop commenting on beats unless their production was ass since the beat is all personal choice. If the flow was perfected and you brought the delivery this track needed this shit would have been one of the best tracks I've heard on most boards.

P.S. You remind me of S.L.U.G.
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Old 03-05-05, 12:59 AM   #3
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Typing as I listen: Your flow gets lumpy which is a damn shame. Need some inflection cuz the deliv is straight 2-dimnsional. The punches...lol wow man. Now THAT'S what the fuck I wanna hear - Personals EVERY line. God damn. Well, at least I know there's one other battler here. The bald-spot line LOL. The finisher was hillarious, lol. I'm gonna stop commenting on beats unless their production was ass since the beat is all personal choice. If the flow was perfected and you brought the delivery this track needed this shit would have been one of the best tracks I've heard on most boards.

P.S. You remind me of S.L.U.G.


appreciate the feed... the flow does get really sloppy in spots cuz it was real rushed, I wanted to make a point that I dont need 2 weeks to drop a diss... but yea appreciate the honesty...1
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Old 03-05-05, 03:21 AM   #4
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not feelin the beat, but nice lines.....................kind of losing the beat at times, but your killin this person..................like a solid mass to air and such........nice........................you miss the beat at times, but you hit it real good at times, hahaha muppet baby line..........lol, and then at the end when you did her voice, critical. I was feeling it. nice diss, good have been a lil better but I but this person is accepting the L...peace


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I left feedback in that a while ago... I was ur first reply ... edit this post w/ another link and I'll hit you with feed. 1

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Old 03-05-05, 09:35 AM   #5
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aight, that was fire. Beat coulda been a lil' better, and the flow was a lil' off in parts. But yea, definately the cream of the RV audio crop son. When I'm lookin' to see shit for my flow and help wit shit like that, i peep your shit. Your style a lot like mine, just all punchlines, don't fuck wit that filler shit. This was a nice comeback, good quality, flow was just off in like one lil' part i think. But it was very fuckin' good, i was feelin' this one. Keep it up homie and keep reppin' the 845. Get at me sometime homie, I think you live around my way somewhere.

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Old 03-05-05, 09:56 AM   #6
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DAMN DAMN DAMN... -_-... sonnnnnnnnned... to bad i like both of ya'll lol.. but shit.. this was hott as fuck -_-
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Old 03-05-05, 12:04 PM   #7
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heard this beat before so I'm not as impressed as the others, lol...

nyce come back though, blah @ ya gurl...good ish though...

P.S. tell ya girl get at me for that battle kyd...
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Old 03-05-05, 01:43 PM   #8
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aight, that was fire. Beat coulda been a lil' better, and the flow was a lil' off in parts. But yea, definately the cream of the RV audio crop son. When I'm lookin' to see shit for my flow and help wit shit like that, i peep your shit. Your style a lot like mine, just all punchlines, don't fuck wit that filler shit. This was a nice comeback, good quality, flow was just off in like one lil' part i think. But it was very fuckin' good, i was feelin' this one. Keep it up homie and keep reppin' the 845. Get at me sometime homie, I think you live around my way somewhere.

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word... where u live at? -- im in beacon/fishkill area... get at me
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Old 03-05-05, 02:28 PM   #9
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this shit was over before it started hot shit once again fam holla
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Old 03-05-05, 11:48 PM   #10
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holy shit that was nice ass hell ... so far u. 9th degree. nostro. and u take cake as my top 3 on this site.. but hella nice drop.. good personals u actually had me laugh'n through most of it .. nice drop
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Old 03-06-05, 02:07 PM   #11
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good feed so far... uppin.
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Old 03-06-05, 03:43 PM   #12
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*listening*

Doesn't sound like your normal shit. I think you might have been a little close to the mic. But besides that, you killed it. "No show in a battle and talk shit.....uh, no" LMAO....that killed it
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Old 03-07-05, 12:55 AM   #13
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word... where u live at? -- im in beacon/fishkill area... get at me


I'm from North Branch, which is like right next to Jeffersonville if you know where that is. It's like 1-1 & 1/2 hours from where you at. I didn't know 845 went that deep, but good shit man. Keep makin' that good-ass music son. All these city niggaz try to act like they got the whole game, Upstate is the future of rap fosho.

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Old 03-07-05, 01:21 AM   #14
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Eh.. Vocals sort of seem pasted on top of the beat..

Flow wasnt really working for you.. And it didnt really own her at any point of the track.. You need to work on your owning skills cause I really cant see her getting the slightest bit embarrased from anything said in this track.. The adlibing at the end was kind of weak and forced out too..
Oh..............
And somehow I dont believe that you wrote and recorded this in 2 hours.. Cause from my own experience your not a very fast writer.. Maybe next time seven..
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Old 03-07-05, 08:00 AM   #15
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ehh..ive never heard a hot diss track :shrugs:. the punches werent really hard hitting ...like nos said. uhm the flow and shit was on the beat all that good ish was correct but the punches really wasnt doing much here.... in her diss only thing i pretty much favored was her shit to fluid ahahaha.. so uhm..neither one of you executed a slaughtering type of audio. and i doubt i'll ever witness one on RV.
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