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MarvJay1009 5 100.00%
metaman 0 0%
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Old 03-08-05, 07:33 PM   #1
metaman
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From: Detroit
metaman vs MarvJay1009

IP: 0592 37D8

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10 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-11-05 at 07:33 PM

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Old 03-08-05, 11:45 PM   #2
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MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-05 11:45 PM.
 
Old 03-09-05, 12:01 AM   #3
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Old 03-09-05, 12:44 AM   #4
MaRVJay
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
 
From: NyC,QUeENS EaRLy!
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look....

dont think da kid slackin quit rappin u'll neva get betta fam..
dudes a fag look at his name he went 2 a gay club & "MET-a-MaN"
dont say ya ass is bout it..you should be da last da shout it..
only time dj's a "play ya record" is when they talkin badd out it
u dont even have a record but me im da 1 many-envy-spittin
be4 you came 2 RV da "site was good" like "20/20 vision".......
i dismantle men...why battlin marv son you cant handle him.....
i kill u in ya state u gon "RiP in DETROiT" just like "hamilton"....
i hope da bitchin stop u aint grippin gloks..or even spittin hott.
u not "shakur" u like dat "shit dat make ppl itch" u a "CHiCKEN-PaC"
why da fukk all da hype...ya ass neva had a buzz all ya life..
keep textin cuzz u like "robbin givens" u "suck on da mic".....

^^^robbin givens was mike tyson's ex wife..if u dont get it
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Old 03-09-05, 12:53 AM   #5
metaman
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From: Detroit
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dog you challenge me to battle saddle up its a test
aim a flame "barbecue" you n "off" you like a pest*
mess your vest if you vex me i make impressions that last
when i blast do like Ipkis dress yo expression in a "mask"**
with line after line strike rhymes that get niggaz to mimin
you must be blind with one eye cuz yo strife here's one sided(sighted)
he claims he the best but uses daffy to maim fucks
this dude got a problem like bush he a "lame duck"***
im through, buckshot and hood dawg goin bananas for round two
i make shit look easy dog monkey see monkey gon do

explanations:
*"Off" is something you buy that you spray that kills pests like mosquitos, people usually use them at barbecues

**Stanley Ipkis is the main character in the movie the "Mask"

***Dude used daffy duck in a punchline in another battle; lame duck is someone at the top who has no real power or authority

i wasnt sure if all that shit needed explainin but betta safe than sorry i guess
 
Old 03-09-05, 01:04 AM   #6
MaRVJay
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okay uppin 4 some votes
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Old 03-09-05, 08:50 AM   #7
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uppppppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiii nnnnnnnnnnnnnn this shyt for votes
 
Old 03-09-05, 12:14 PM   #8
MaRVJay
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Old 03-09-05, 12:23 PM   #9
Ryan Hughes
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

V/Marvjay1009....this was a good battle but marv came wit hard hittin punchs an good wordplay wit some personals his structure was on point metaman u had some good lines but u werent consistent wit the diss's ive seen better from u...no hate good battle RETURN THE FAVOR
opner=marv
closer=marv
structure=tie
punchs=marv
person=marv
overall=marvjay1009
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Old 03-09-05, 06:14 PM   #10
MaRVJay
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u gota leave a link fam........but uppin 4 more votes
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Old 03-09-05, 06:23 PM   #11
Prophysics
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

well another wack verse from you MARV but metaman is another wack challenger, you need to stop battleing newbs.lol
butbonce again you win becuase the other guy was kinda wack
your verse wasmore better all around alaso you had OK multies and shit
metaman you need to stop defing your bars, if you have to defny each bar then dont use it, so marve gets my votre
 
Old 03-09-05, 06:25 PM   #12
Kyleon
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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009

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checkin 'em polls....................
 
Old 03-09-05, 06:28 PM   #13
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yo bitch both of you better RTF.....................
 
Old 03-09-05, 06:29 PM   #14
Kyleon
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that was top 10 verses i've seen you drop marvelous...good ish
 
Old 03-09-05, 06:35 PM   #15
MaRVJay
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yo prop whut da fukk is u smokin fam lol i battle nebody on dis bitch...da title newbie is a fukki excuse 4 niggaz not knownin how da rap...goodlookin graph
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