Ill embedd it in your memory, that youll remember me (15)
Cos ull never know a cat who gives so much damn energy (15)
Wheneva I step into the booth, I give out truth (14)
Im orginal in whatever I say or do (13)
Read my lines, feel my rhymes, don’t close your eyes
Because I preach originality, don’t be blind
To the words in front of you, it is my time
We need to make some changes in the world like 2pac sed
But after that the nigga goes to vegas and ends up dead
Its sad to see another brother fallen to the streets
But he is more important than those tryna eat?
Na the only thing more important is that he a celebrity
So all yall single minded busters….widen ure intelligence
But keep single minded when comin to me, cos im the only preference

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let loose 2 this//get use 2 this//its this year we swear we ridiculous//
all my dawgs let loose 2 this//all my gurls let loose 2 this//
if u stress in ur packs let loose 2 this//u just say fuck the rest and let loose 2 this

i done changed my stylz but still am a genius
2 blast @ a nigga only need 1 rezon
holes in ya body
left ur soul leaking,dying,cant breathe u coughing and weazing
and u cant think str8,coz theres poison in ya system
got ya self drowned in a pool of venom
and them hollow tip darts ripped thru ya denim
i spit a sound thats so profound, i spit one rap a month
just so ya cant figure out
the way i think and the way i rap
i hav many stylz and they all sound phat
blowing niggaz off the map, cant stand unofficial
im the horror of the night, i shut down ya block just for a gun fight
and my guns are like dogs, they bark and bite...

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let loose 2 this//get use 2 this//its this year we swear we ridiculous//
all my dawgs let loose 2 this//all my gurls let loose 2 this//
if u stress in ur packs let loose 2 this//u just say fuck the rest and let loose 2 this


(Chorus done by Chris Aka Canox...he aint on this site be he my homie)

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uppinnn................cmon yall

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not bad man.....haha, pretty much just self-glor eh....ahh well, it was pretty entertaining

all i suggest, is maybe up the complexity of your rhymes a little more, but this had really good flow and i pictured a bumping beat, it was pretty fun reading this yo, haha....yeah, and up vocab a little more, maybe get some wordplay....but overall, this would make a pretty good song if you get a good beat, keep up man

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thanks man ......uppin

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Ya gonna drop this on audio or sumthing? Cause it'd make a damn good bump track nahmsayin?

Self-glorifying and all but some insightful content here and there too ya kno, vocab was okay, might up it a little with some wordplay and slightly more original stuff but overall I liked this. Could picture it as an audio, had good emotion here and there.

Keep it up!

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Thank you ma.....thats what evrybody been sayin back at home that i should put this an audio so when I get a mic....damnnn im gonna get krunk loll.....pzzz

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