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03-20-05, 02:09 AM
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Socrates New Shit - My Dreams
IP: D8B0 7EC9
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03-20-05, 07:36 AM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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beat is nice
ur vocals sound muffled...maybe too much noise redux? I could hear your Eminem impression with the rhyming Your presence needs to be upped and the effect on the chorus was blah... and the Pause-resonse thing you did needed to be exaggerated more to be effective not a bad track U got potential with the voice 1 RTV please http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=182681 Last edited by Tha Q : 03-20-05 at 01:07 PM. |
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03-20-05, 10:35 AM
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Rastafari Walk Tall
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IP: 8F89 97C4
listening...
beat is nice......lyrics are good...flow is a lil shakey...the hook was ok, the effect on it was a lil to obvious...overall is a pretty decent track...drop sum feed on ma shit called Last Breath yo i called you out in bitch slapped, go and check....that 1-0 in ur record is cos i no-showed due to no intanet connection, i aint loose to you, time to rctify tha situation..go and accept plz  and dont duck socrates....1
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03-20-05, 12:59 PM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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beat is dope, you lack energy, this shows potential, but like Q said, lyrics are kinda muffled, and the presence needs to be upped, i think if the energy was there this would be a real nice track, lots of potential... keep droppin.
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03-20-05, 12:59 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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*listening*
First thing I noticed was your vocals came in a little loud. Your presence isn't really there yet, and this isn't the type of track where you would try to showcase your presence. Your flow was a little choppy. I think you should get on some faster beats to help you flow a little better. If anythig, it would give you some practice....lol. LMAO @ spit complex like apartment buildings. The biggest thing I noticed you lacking is the emotion. I can tell that this track had some meaning to you or you wouldn't have called it My Dreams. Put some real emotion into it and I'm willing to bet it turns out 100x better ™
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