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03-09-05, 11:28 PM | #1 | |||||||
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i structurized my rhymes
memorize every line i spit it one word at a time i was gifted with a confused mind i was lifted by rap music that pulled me behind theres nothin different between me an tha rest that i can find pain many have been through..... why must i rewind every word when i speaks tha truth why are people so blind an stupid wat isnt true is that they see we tha ones whos ruthless but we gathered together white an black it dont matter tha weather tha stars an strips is ta make ya feel better isnt our country great ta lie to our face when ever its business should have knowin this in tha first place when my pen runs outta ink i smoke a few joints sit back an drink this shits wack but it makes a point i think if ya dont relax your shits bound ta stink welcom to tha next round dont look down move or blink forty seconds ta spit it no recelections KO's is how ta get it first round dont sweet it you must attend church or did ya get elected i aint playin pretend boy check it.... you out here ta make a friend cuz you lonely homeboy in tha sentence there's a message did ya get ahhh just wat i thought you wasnt payin attenction...........PEACE HOLLA BACK CB83
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03-09-05, 11:34 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 3240 794D
ya rhymes pretty cool man keep it up i like it
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03-09-05, 11:35 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 3240 794D
damn man u didnt get no feed back or nuthin
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03-09-05, 11:36 PM | #4 | ||||||
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oh well.....................holla at cha!
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03-09-05, 11:41 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: CBD1 4982
ya bite this shit from eminems song mosh
Scrutinize every word, memorize every line I spit it once, refuel, reenergize, and rewind I give sight to the blind, mind sight through the mind I excersize my right to express when I feel it's time It's just all in your mind, what you interpret it as I say to fight you take it as I? gonna whip someone's ass If you don't understand don't even bother to ask A father who has grown up with a fatherless past Who has blown up now to rap phenomenon that has Or at least shows no difficulty multi task And juggling both, perhaps mastered his craft slash Entrepreneur who has held long too few more rap acts Who has had a few obstacles thrown his way through the last half Of his career typical manure moving past that Mister kiss his ass crack, he's a class act Rubber band man, yea he just snaps back To the people up top, on the side and the middle, Come together, let's all bomb and swamp just a little Just let it gradually build, from the front to the back All you can see is a sea of people, some white and some black Don't matter what color, all that matters is we gathered together To celebrate for the same cause, no matter the weather If it rains let it rain, yea the wetter the better They ain't gonna stop us, they can't, we're stronger now more then ever, They tell us no we say yea, they tell us stop we say go, Rebel with a rebel yell, raise hell we gonna let em know Stomp, push up, mush, fuck Bush, until they bring our troops home come on just . . . Imagine it pouring, it's raining down on us, Mosh pits outside the oval office Someone's trying to tell us something, maybe this is God just saying we're responsible for this monster, this coward, that we have empowered This is Bin Laden, look at his head nodding, How could we allow something like this, Without pumping our fist Now this is our, final hour Let me be the voice, and your strength, and your choice Let me simplify the rhyme, just to amplify the noise Try to amplify the times it, and multiply it by six Teen million people are equal of this high pitch Maybe we can reach Al Quaida through my speech Let the President answer on high anarchy Strap him with AK-47, let him go Fight his own war, let him impress daddy that way No more blood for oil, we got our own battles to fight on our soil No more psychological warfare to trick us to think that we ain't loyal If we don't serve our own country we're patronizing a hero Look in his eyes, it's all lies, the stars and stripes They've been swiped, washed out and wiped, And Replaced with his own face, mosh now or die If I get sniped tonight you'll know why, because I told you to fight
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03-09-05, 11:58 PM | #6 | ||||
www.militantmusic.com
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IP: CBD1 4982
man why did ya bite lyrics....real emcees dont need to do that and if u do bite dont off eminem the most well known emcee
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03-12-05, 10:15 PM | #7 | ||||
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IP: A3EA 639E
well ova then u bitin' em's rhymes a lil bit at the beginning u did ight in ur open mic...structure was ok...vocab was ight need a lil more elevation...work on ur wordplay...& overall i would say it'z 6.5/10 keep workin at it & u'll b at ur potential ya dig
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