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No Hate
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You called me wack then said set it up...so here it is son. Check in and drop.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-12-05 at 06:25 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed - went over line limit

By the way... If you duck this... you are a bitch...

Natural Instincts has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-11-05 12:08 AM.

im sure u 'aim 2 please' but you missed it the objective critically
ur shitty free must be why ur perfectly healthy... you lack 'diss-ability'!!!

you gon' catch Ls in my circle like the Lexus Emblem
guns? expect em cuz youd have to be a 'Houston fan' just to hold a 'Tek-son'

money fronted is the only time your 'advances-have-started'
the way u try to hold em down im surprized he hasnt pressed harras-ment-charges

the only time you 'ride with ur homies' is you with whips chaps n saddles
i dont need nameplays... i made 5 the last time i clipped your wack ass in battle

i think this cats got multiple accounts cuz when it goes down... you be too easy
ILL re-ITERATE the reason you cant read my verse is cuz u cant see me


"in shoes 2 big for him" with a 'dash' in his name means 'running' is the only thing this "clown" wins
but really...how can ill not be a fag with nothing but colons around him????

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Op!n!on has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-11-05 04:55 PM.

Natural Instincts eh...

shit, you be to easy...battlin a newb? Your no where near a vet
just a bitch, check ya rec, only wins a no show from carson jet
your audios just give headaches your lines are played and wack
RV told you to leave the site...so what the fuck you doing back?
take a hint...you're straight up wack man, it's time for you to stop
your verses come out just like your record, a constant losing drop
you're on the route to losing, cause i got this battle without a doubt
NOK? theres no way you're a king, but you're about to be knocked out

His old names: ub2ez, Headache...
He's in NOK...

Don't get anything...don't vote.

Voted For: Op!n!on

here's how i see it

natural....you came out with a nice opener, but then the next few bars you kinda weakened up, just mainly stating some random statements that didnt really diss him, your structure was messed to shit, and that took away from the flow flowing and the effectiveness of your attempted punches/personals....it was really hard to follow at times because your structure was bad....so, overall, you didnt come as hard, which made your punches/personals weak as hell, and your structure and flow were really bad....so work on that mainly, but you did have nice creativity and wordplay

opinion....not a bad battle for your first, haha, your had nice personals in there, some that hit really hard, like the opener and the closer, good shit right there....weakest line was the 3rd bar, i thought the wordplay used was a little crappy, thought it coulda been better to make it more effective....but overall, i think you stayed more consistant with dissing, and your personals/punches hit harder...you had very nice structure which helped....so, thats why your getting the vote....but you need to up your vocab, i think, thats really all, but it didnt affect your verse too much....word, keep up yo

v/opinion

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