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03-18-05, 02:16 AM | #1 | |||||||
Ms. Get Gully
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Paranoia(sample)
IP: 5F44 426C
This Siegal beat been used alot but someone is forcing me to write to it...its sposed to be a collab soon.....when i re-record and do it a lil better
WARNING-.....Volume is Low in the beginning but then lifts up a lil bit after a few seconds so i already know thats somethin yall gonna comment bout...its only a minute long....Sample tho...gotta re-do it some day www.rideinconline.com/jamroom/bands/165 2nd song down. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2031244 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=182236 |
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03-18-05, 06:01 AM | #2 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: 7222 C45A
Beanie beat.. yessir.. horrible quality.. but I'm hearin' the lines.. you got a cool flow, the punch-in's are sloppy and you ain't got much emotion with ya shit, but there's always room for improvement.. keep it movin.
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03-18-05, 10:19 AM | #3 | |||||
Light Weight
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IP: A338 C9EF
aight this my beat me,and my crewmates killed this beat...aight production needs work ma...i can here where you stopped recording and started the next few lines...cause by 1 of 2 problems your cutting not accurate or you dont start spittin for the next lines by doing a few words you did for the last line...if you do it'll help make a smooth transition...you tryna have a continueous flow...but you gotta know where to take those breathes...and you gotta have the syllable count accurate...sound like you rushing at times...lyrics were good...i hear the multis
overall it has potential but it needs some work...keep doing ya thing aight fam...holla at me. 1
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03-18-05, 04:54 PM | #4 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 37BA F453
lol this beat still dope,quality is horible,nice voice,but the quality is fuckin wack,nice flow,cqant really hear the lyrics,i can hear when you started to record the next line
overall with a better quality it could be perfect, |
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03-18-05, 05:05 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 07A8 D079
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^^basically what he said, i notice the cut too, but you are more clear on this track than any other track you laid out.. except the beginning needs boostin of volume like u said, cuz i didn't even notice u were startin to rap.. lyrics were nice, u just have to work on ya flow a lil'... stay up, laydee.. ha get at ya girl sum timez 1
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03-19-05, 06:36 AM | #6 | |||||
Rastafari Walk Tall
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IP: B012 742A
your quality needs to get better, feeling the concept and the lines where i hear them pretty good, some problems with your editing that mess up you track but dont matter if your re-recordin....pretty gd
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