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Old 03-12-05, 09:31 PM   #1
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V1
Rap is different nowa days, stupid mutha fuckas usin gats ta spray,
while harmless mutha fuckas gettin head X-rays, Phive and armada collectin advance pays, then phive says rap stays, murdz dawg producing rap plays, fuck the homos, we cap gays,

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Rap aint the same anymore kids, crack head takin more hits, rappers aint producin theyre own spits, bitches wit fake tits spreading aids and shit, so kid ya betta split, when the crack is lit, or youll end up popped like a zit,

V2
Yo im poppin mutha fuckas like pringles, im makin heads tingle, im # 1 wit my singles, ME and my homies runnin shit like laura ingles, usin fisticuffs flakin emcees like shingles,
i rip on tracks, and get A+'s on feed backs, phive and my homies are leaned back, fucking bitches and spittin rap,

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Rap aint the same anymore kids, crack head takin more hits, rappers aint producin theyre own spits, bitches wit fake tits spreading aids and shit, so kid ya betta split, when the crack is lit, or youll end up popped like a zit,

V3
Murdz dawgy dawg will leave ya brain lost in da fog, Phive abide but my lyrics come from god, im switch hittin like joe carter, imma vet cuz i was a starter, the rap bombarder, im eatin pussy wit tar-tar,
im hittin on raps, wit my lines makin laps, so much direction yall need maps,

V4
I rap cuz ive got the skills ta do shit, life is like glass dawg im seein right through it,
people dying on the street cuz of crazy motha fuckas, robbing seven elevens, and blastin off suckas, im causing ruckus, cuz phive and my homies no body can stop us,

Chorus
Rap aint the same anymore kids, crack head takin more hits, rappers aint producin theyre own spits, bitches wit fake tits spreading aids and shit, so kid ya betta split, when the crack is lit, or youll end up popped like a zit,
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Old 03-12-05, 09:50 PM   #2
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LOL Shit was nice like the punches and multies and vocab work on the structure fam but the hook was hot as fuck this shit it fire Tony Green gives it a 8/10

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Old 03-12-05, 10:18 PM   #3
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thanx g your shit is nice too man gimme a holla some time g i wanna join nok man
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Old 03-12-05, 10:28 PM   #4
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Old 03-12-05, 10:47 PM   #5
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where is that at man i have no clue g
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Old 03-14-05, 12:34 PM   #6
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yo uppin fo some feedback my homies
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Old 03-14-05, 09:56 PM   #7
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yo uppin fo some feedback
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Old 03-14-05, 10:00 PM   #8
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mEH THE PUNCHES WAS GOOD, FLOWED NICLY AND MULTIES WAS AIIGHT.


This was a good verse although you need to upp ya wordplay...then it'll be dope.
But it's good either way ya heard?

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Old 03-14-05, 10:41 PM   #9
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thax g that means alot comin fromyou man your like the best on this site man lemme join ya crew
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Old 03-15-05, 11:55 PM   #10
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uppin fo some feed back
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Old 03-18-05, 12:00 AM   #11
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Old 03-22-05, 07:01 PM   #12
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