when it comes 2 rap i'm ur guide
cuz all u rappaz love ta dickride
who's is it bitch our or there side
caught in a moment,cant decide
told ta elevate, well fuck, i tried
put in all my skills and applied
hard 4 ideas ta flow in this mind
can't see wuts wrong as if i'm blind
so as these words sink
in these pages wit ink
gotta click on the link
cuz at vocals ya'll suck, face it u just stink
i can just freestyle faster than you can blink
cuz when im offline i got autographs too sign
and when i'm online damn rite your ass is mine
i got time ta grind, and put my life rite behind
and try ta find these words from this mind
line after line and i'm never lyin' in a line
just keep on goin till i snap this spine of mine
and u know damn will i'm tryin' ta keep this flyin

these arms as hard as steel
these rhymes of mine heal
whether i'm killed
or dropped from a deal
i'm always keepin it real

my muthafuckin slut motha discouraging me from my dream
lowerin my hope and giving me hell, takin away self-esteem
pushin me ta just whip her ass as if she was whipped cream
tear her apart from the seam, so mad my ear's spilling steam
these feelings can't be redeemed nuthins the way it seemed
asking myself if i have a choice knowing i ain't got the voice
fuck it, dont care if rap was pizza i'd be grabbing every slice
tryin ta be nice but beefin wit me gon leev u runnin like mice
but got these pesty fuckers running all over me like they lice
i'll have ur ass thinking twice 'fore u go N' bite off Obie Trice
complain ur hard till u wimp out and notice ur eyes r blue ish
so it's so fuckin easy ta see that you ain't nuthin but jewish


these arms as hard as steel
these rhymes of mine heal
whether i'm killed
or dropped from a deal
i'm always keepin it real

nice change of structurein the middle, but kinda hard to catch the first verse til you git into it...overall it was cool...8/10

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yo thanx LFS uppin on more feedback yo....

shit homie nice shit here 8.5/10 me and u is gettin up there with the dopest on the site nice rhymes nice style and flow u got in this piece

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